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Hillhouse High School In Connecticut Adds Writing Portion To All Classes

  Melissa Bailey First Posted: 12/12/11 02:54 PM ET Updated: 12/12/11 02:56 PM ET

Hillhouse High School
Sophomore Hydiea Johnson is getting used to writing in every class.

This piece comes to us courtesy of New Haven Independent.

Writing ... again? groaned Fred Redeaux's honors geometry class.

"Let me give you a news flash," the teacher responded. "You'll be writing come Christmas. You'll be writing when Santa comes. You'll be writing all next year."

Redeaux made the announcement at James Hillhouse High School the other day as he pushed forward into the third month of a non-fiction writing requirement designed to boost flagging literacy rates.

The most recent data show 90 percent of the incoming freshman class at Hillhouse is reading below grade level, according to the Achieve3000 non-fiction reading test kids took in November, said David Goldblum, who runs the freshman academy.

Goldblum joined Redeaux and over a dozen other teachers over the summer to volunteer on a new literacy team. They came up with a solution that's being implemented this fall: Every teacher in every class, from math to art to gym, now has to set aside 10 minutes per class on a non-fiction writing assignment.

"We realized we have a problem in terms of literacy," Redeaux said. "If they can't read or write, they're not going to be successful in college."

Redeaux, who has taught at Hillhouse for 12 years, said he has found that students' literacy skills can get in the way of their learning even in math class.

"If you can't read a word problem, you certainly can't solve it," he said.

Redeaux is leading an interdisciplinary team of teachers spearheading a new literacy campaign.

He and his colleagues started off the school year by passing out 4,000 journals, one for each student in each class. The journal stays inside the classroom. Every class period, students take it out and respond to a writing prompt.

Goldblum said the school adopted the method after reviewing research that showed that non-fiction journal writing boosts students' performance across all subjects.

The writing journals emerged last Thursday afternoon at Redeaux's honors geometry class, where he led 16 sophomores through a series of problems on volume and surface area. One problem asked students to find the volume of a hemi-spherical soup pot.

"I don't want you to tell me, I want you to write to me," Redeaux instructed as students began to blurt out an answer.

One student said she didn't know where to start.

"Write what you think," he offered.

"What if I don't even think?" said the student.

"You think something," he coaxed.

Students spend 10 to 20 minutes of every class writing, reckoned sophomore Hydiea Johnson.

"At times it can be annoying," she said, "but it's nothing now. We've been doing it for, like, a month."

One goal behind the writing requirement is to have students think critically about what they're learning. Another, of course, is to improve their writing skills.

The emphasis on literacy is visible in Redeaux's classroom.

"Let me tell you a story," Redeaux began at one point, perching for a moment on an empty desk. Students looked up, ready of another dose of his humor to get them through the day.

"It was a hot day," Redeaux recounted with dramatic flare. "I was on the Boston Post Road. I was thinking about coming to school, and I bought some posters."

He pointed them out to the class: On one side of the room, brightly colored posters show the formulas for finding the area of a triangles and the volume of spheres.

"Why did I spend my hard-earned money?" he asked. "I want you to use them."

"Why is there a literature poster?" asked one student, perusing the walls. Near where she sat, another set of posters announced proper punctuation and proofreading marks.

"Because we do a lot of writing," Redeaux said.

"I thought November was non-fiction writing month," one student said.

Redeaux replied that every month is writing month. For homework, he asked students to explain in writing the answer to a problem they'd solved in class.

When he gets the homework back, he'll use a writing rubric to assess the work. The rubric, used by all teachers, aims to standardize the way writing is being taught and graded in the school. Click here to view the rubric; Click here for a FAQ on the writing requirement.

In Thursday's class, not all students in Redeaux's class moved their pencils during two writing sessions. "Some of them didn't really understand what strategy to apply for the problem," he conceded. "That's why I gave them the opportunity to write" some more at home.

The expectation is for every teacher to spend at least 10 minutes on writing in every class. Redeaux said he's generally been able to do that, except when testing or assemblies interfere. Administrators have been checking journals in classes across the disciplines to make sure students are getting the writing done.

The initiative was inspired by a school in Brockton, Mass., said Hillhouse Principal Kermit Carolina. He said he met the principal of Brockton High School at a school improvement conference in Chicago and learned of a stunning success story at the urban school of 4,000 kids.

In 1998, 44 percent of the students at Brockton High were failing English on standardized tests and 75 percent were failing math. Staff implemented a school-wide literacy initiative that included a daily writing requirement in every class. Over the course of 12 years, the number of students failing English fell from 44 percent to 5 percent. The story was captured in a CBS special last November -- Click on the play arrow to watch.

Carolina said the story hit home for him.

"Literacy is our greatest challenge at Hillhouse," Carolina said. He said the demographics at Brockton are similar to those at Hillhouse, where 97 percent of students are black or Hispanic and 80 percent qualify for free or reduced-priced lunch, a measure of poverty.

Carolina said he returned from the Chicago conference and played an excerpt of the CBS report to a group of teachers. Then they took the initiative to develop a literacy campaign. Teachers volunteered their time over the summer, and continue to do so on Saturdays.

On Nov. 18, Redeaux and other teachers headed up to Brockton High School to learn some first-hand tips. He said he picked up some good ideas to bring back to New Haven as the literacy initiative expands beyond the writing requirement.

In his own class, Redeaux said, the added writing has helped him gauge where students are struggling with literacy, so he can help boost those skills during extra sessions at Saturday Academy.

He remained hopeful that his students will make "tremendous gains."

"The only direction we can go is up."

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This piece comes to us courtesy of New Haven Independent. Writing ... again? groaned Fred Redeaux's honors geometry class. "Let me give you a news flash," the teacher responded. "You'll be writi...
This piece comes to us courtesy of New Haven Independent. Writing ... again? groaned Fred Redeaux's honors geometry class. "Let me give you a news flash," the teacher responded. "You'll be writi...
 
 
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VA Jill
Retired RN, Army mom. Bring the troops home!
11:50 AM on 12/13/2011
My daughter's high school was like this, and it was a private parochial school. She is an extremely good writer now. My son, on the other hand, went to a public high school where he hardly ever had to write anything. He can't write a paper to save his life.
08:03 AM on 12/13/2011
We are living in a time rich in words and poor in writing. We are all surrounded by text. We are now visual communicators. However we are not terribly adept at story telling. Children learn how to communicate complex thoughts through practice and through reading. The simple act of talking about one's day at the dinner table is great practice. Reading and being read to are wonderful ways to reinforce the art of storytelling.
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07:15 AM on 12/13/2011
If it works, it won't work without people:

"Carolina said he returned from the Chicago conference and played an excerpt of the CBS report to a group of teachers. Then they took the initiative to develop a literacy campaign. Teachers volunteered their time over the summer, and continue to do so on Saturdays."

This is the real point of the article: teachers should work for free. I wonder how many were pressured into volunteering--taking time from their own families--to do this.
01:35 AM on 12/13/2011
As a special education teacher, I have issue with having kids writing essays in classes like PE, music and art. Many of my students, due to learning disabilities, underperform academically. However, they excel in many other areas such as sports and the arts. By requiring them to write in those classes, you have stripped away the one place they could succeed unconditionally. I have perfectly able students failing PE because they cannot write well or perform on a multiple choice test now required as part of the curriculum. We have taken away their release and the one thing they enjoyed about coming to school.
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Michael D Ballantine
Former Presidential Candidate - Amer Elect 2012
07:43 PM on 12/12/2011
As an ESL teacher, I recognize that writing is the most difficult task for my students to master. They can stumble through reading and learn to speak from Disney but when it comes to writing, they have to organize their thoughts in English and then express them. I am in the process of integrating all of their classes in our school into one language experience incorporating all the disciplines to build skills. Multidisciplinary studies are the only way to reinforce student comprehension with so many distractions outside of school.

Low-income students have many of the same handicaps as ESL students, limited linguistic variety at home as well as an inability to relate to the cultural constructs of much of the learning materials presented at school. This is an excellent idea for building student skill level and encouraging critical thinking. Best of luck with the program.
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Lisa Shields
Poet & Advocate For Special Needs Children
07:24 PM on 12/12/2011
And if you checked the writing scores nationally, you might understand why.
Math may up, but writing? Abysmal.
06:18 PM on 12/12/2011
Just making students write won't improve their writing. You need to teach them how to write. That means going over examples of good and bad writing, giving them quick feedback on their writing assignments, pointing out their mistakes, showing them how to improve, and giving them the chance to make revisions. To do this requires small class sizes, which requires more money spent on education. That's why it will never happen.

We know what works; forcing students to write about dodge ball in PE class for 10 minutes in a journal that no one will ever read or correct isn't it. We need small classes for reading and writing. We need targeted intervention classes for struggling readers, with individualized instruction. That's what works.
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WilmaJune
06:31 PM on 12/12/2011
Practice makes perfect. What do you consider a small class size? As students write about different subjects, proper sentence structure and improved vocabulary will be learned more easily. Nobody wants to rewrite the same information over and over. That is the reason students hate English Class. Revisions kill creativity.
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Lisa Shields
Poet & Advocate For Special Needs Children
07:28 PM on 12/12/2011
I beg to differ.
Even Picasso said that before you can break the rules, you have to know what they are. Kids lack the ability (and occasionally the willingness) to self edit. I've taught creative writing to high school aged kids, and was shocked by the the lack of proficiency in basic writing...and these were kids who were top of their classes.
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Michael D Ballantine
Former Presidential Candidate - Amer Elect 2012
07:46 PM on 12/12/2011
I disagree. When you teach students a skill in isolation, they quickly become bored. Writing is a cumulative learning experience. The more you write, the better you get. When students have an opportunity to express themselves in a variety of formats, they usually do better. Further, instead of having one long boring class, they are having mini-classes. Whereas, most teachers should have learned the basics of writing themselves, allowing them to correct on the fly. This is a positive step away from the current teach-to-the-test mentality.
08:45 PM on 12/12/2011
So can we teach math the same way? Just give them a bunch of math problems without ever teaching them the skills or correcting their mistakes? Do you think they'll just figure it out on their own? Neither do I.
REDSTATEREFUGEE
Texan by birth ; Californian by choice
05:14 PM on 12/12/2011
Praise to the principal for incorporating writing into all courses across the curricula. Since I am near the end of my career teaching freshman composition, I can attest that the popular conception that many students are unprepared for college or business writing is valid. Each year that I have taught, from 1968 until the present, college freshmen are more deficient in basic writing skills.

At my Central California community college, 55% of all presenting freshmen are required to take one or more of the following developmental courses: writing, reading, and/or basic mathematics. While it is comforting to blame public school teachers, the fault lies chiefly in our modern families, which do not dine together ( providing opportunities to engage in critical discourse ), do not encourage reading ( playing alone on the PC ), do not interact face-to-face, leading to college classroom behaviors that are unacceptable, and, foremost, do not require a sense of self-discipline, organization, and goal completion.

All of the above litany of family lapses lead to underperformance in public schools and a 50% drop out rate in freshman classes in community colleges. Finally, to add to the disastrous educational tsunami engulfing our nation, curricula are watered down to assure social promotion. For example, accelerated course work in high school resembles what would have been standard 1960 offerings. The students in Advanced Placement obtain a pre-college education, while those in lesser demanding courses appear to drift through, finally beaching themselves in community college.
05:57 PM on 12/12/2011
It's 90% at the community college closest to my home. And not much better in the state universities.
06:58 PM on 12/12/2011
I cannot reply to the generalization, as my 14 year old daughter is taking an on-line AP Biology course, but what she is doing is quite sophisticated. Her IB English and American History are very demanding as well. I am not quite so sure of her IB Chemistry (which seems to be somewhat less demanding than the college chemistry I took in 12th grade) and IB Physics (which seems to on the par with a good honors high school physics class, but is not college level). Her calculus class is college level, and she will get college credit for it.

But she is studying upwards of 30 hours a week at this point.

I restricted their TV and screen time years ago to get them reading. It worked. My 11 year old boy is reading Shogun now. My daughter likes to roam Wikipedia when she has a few minutes to kill. She will be off to college via Running Start next year on her way to a dual engineering degree.
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Michael D Ballantine
Former Presidential Candidate - Amer Elect 2012
07:47 PM on 12/12/2011
The IB curriculum blows away most American public school programs. You have made a good choice for your daughter.
REDSTATEREFUGEE
Texan by birth ; Californian by choice
08:14 PM on 12/12/2011
Thanks for your reply......Your son and daughter are not the students I was focusing on. They will probably enter universities and have been intellectually well-nourished at home. Congratulations....
04:45 PM on 12/12/2011
What were those kids given to read in grade school? If they can't find stuff they want to read, possibly on their own time, then what do they expect? Of course if there is science mixed with the literature it can only be for the good.

What is this cheap technology for?

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