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How Obama Was Clobbered

Posted: 10/04/2012 8:42 am

If you believe Barack Obama distinguished himself favorably in the first debate, you won't like the following rampage one bit. Those who judge debates on quality of information and truthfulness might have kept different score. But in the realm of making an impression, and in winning the lightning-quick emotional judgments that people make of each other, Obama suffered from ineloquence, hesitation, rambling, old material (the grandmother again, really?), and inadvertent signals of weakness.

Obama's painful defeat was foreshadowed by the president's first response, when he utterly ignored moderator Jim Lehrer's question and delivered a prepared opening statement. All political debaters bring prepared material to the podium. But without the slightest reference to the question in framing his answer, or allusion to Lehrer's topic within the answer, Obama's opening segment bristled with nonchalant disrespect for the audience. And Romney trounced him by buckling right down to his first volley of highly energized and precisely relevant bullet points.

The bizarre opening play could be forgotten if the president had snapped out of his rote recitation quickly thereafter, but Obama's entire performance conveyed the impression of a candidate whose staff had failed to inform him that the event was a debate. He appeared flummoxed by questions, baffled and wounded by his opponent's attacks, peevish, and overwhelmed by Romney's passion.

The body language was as unpresidential as it gets. Obama looked exhausted, and perhaps he was -- the man is running the country and managing responses to world affairs, while also struggling to keep his job. Governor Romney's only job is to prepare for campaign events. So it was understandable when Obama appeared to be performing a chore -- scowling, withdrawing, stuttering, going through motions.

Still, his job for 90 minutes was to perform in a nationally broadcast TV show that serves an important function in the democracy. If this had been an audition for a dramatic role as president, President Obama wouldn't get a call-back. He was sluggish; his responses amorphous and dissolute. Romney was quick and precise.

Memo to Obama campaign staff: Get a grip on your man and eliminate the following habits:

  • "Wanna." First of all, he should stop saying "wanna" entirely. Failing to pronounce words is unpresidential. More important, in a debate, saying you want to do something is weak compared to saying you will do something. Obama is accused of failure. His assertions should be filled with "I did" and "I will do." Romney did not "want" anything in this debate. He intended. That is a presidential attitude.
  • "Four years ago." This is whining. Whining is also unpresidential. Everyone knows Obama was elected at a difficult historical moment. Complaining affirms accusations of failure.
  • Nodding. It is inadvisable to nod your head when the opposing candidate is blasting you mercilessly! Humility is fine, and so is acknowledgment that you're listening. But on TV, it looks like you are agreeing.
  • Tighten the hell up. Does the president believe the eloquence myth? Because although Barack Obama is an outstanding writer, and a great orator when working from a script, he is not often an eloquent man off-script. Viewers had time to check scores on ESPN while he gathered his woolen thoughts in long preludes to halting replies. The president's sentences were strung together in wide, spacious nets of speech that allowed the viewer's attention to slip through and crash to the ground. Obama worked the game like a slow pitcher in baseball who walks halfway to the infield and back between pitches, trying to break the batter's rhythm. In this case, it just gave Romney time to reload.
  • "I believe." Less theory, more declamation, please. The president's most potentially powerful remarks were undermined at the end by the repeated weak-kneed disclaimer: "That's not what I believe." Against Romney's passionate engagement and purposeful language, Obama's intellectual musing sounded as if a political science professor had taken the president's place on stage.

Obama's listless closing statement might be explained as a natural consequence of the thrashing he had just endured. Here, and at other times, the president seemed to credit Americans with the progress made during the first term. That is flattering, and of course everyone wants a president who doesn't get too carried away with himself. But constant deflection of credit invites people to muse over this question: "Well, then, what do we need you for?"

Here's hoping the president gets more sleep before the next debate.

 
 
 

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Mountainhighclub99
Dress me up for battle, But all I want is peace!
06:58 PM on 10/06/2012
Who cares who won what? What did Romney win? A debate are you serious. Romney need to be getting real voters. He is behind on the National Electorial Map. That's what he need to win.
06:46 AM on 10/06/2012
Too bad the smears of the left were allowed all the replies and/or remarks to a very careful and well-written blog by Brad Hill.
06:37 AM on 10/06/2012
You GO, Brad Hill!
06:36 AM on 10/06/2012
Great analysis by Brad Hill!
11:43 AM on 10/05/2012
I watched Romney rant will seizing the moment in the spotlight. We must remember that "the Bushes & Reagan lost their first debate so I wasn't going to get upset over a debate. I'll say it again "working for a lawyer in the 1970's said to me while working on a case "people lie so much that they can't recognize the truth is only a fool."
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ConnieInCleveland
One Lonely Voice trying to make a difference
05:18 AM on 10/05/2012
It's easy to be quick and precise when you're making stuff up. Mitt Romney was wrong on the majority of things he was so precise about. Doesn't the truth matter? What kind of evaluation only counts demeanor and not facts? Honesty not a requirement if one says it precisely? How sad is that.
06:37 AM on 10/06/2012
Oh, come on--what did Mitt make up?-- stop whining!
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ConnieInCleveland
One Lonely Voice trying to make a difference
08:18 AM on 10/06/2012
Oh, you are right. He changed his mind and now he is going to offer insurance, which covers pre-existing conditions. Oh, you are right he now cares about the working poor. He has a plan to create jobs. He won't say what jobs, or why he has kept it secret, but we should trust what he says. Take him at his word.

He will provide vouchers to seniors for Medicare and they will be on their own to purchase their own insurance. Yes, he did say that and we should trust that the insurance companies will not make victims out of seniors.

I'm not whining. I'm crying. Some people believe he can lead and will vote for him. How sad is that. I don't want to ride on the roof of his car, while the have's and have more's get to ride on the inside. No, I'm not whining, I'm crying.
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Jerry Frey
unCommon sense for the common good
04:53 AM on 10/05/2012
Good analysis of Obama meltdown - will he be any better sitting on a stool?
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Relentless rik
This country is SO screwed!
04:31 AM on 10/05/2012
Of course Romney won! He had his hard drive defragged 8 hours before the debate!
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02:43 AM on 10/05/2012
I have never read anything this man has written except this article. Evidently he needs to read more, and research better. Life, let alone insignificant fluff like presidential "debates", doesn't just need a better "script". Life requires a lot more than "bullet points" or "debate performances" to make any real difference. Painful as it is, that is a fact.
06:38 AM on 10/06/2012
Evidently you hate to be wrong --lol
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02:36 PM on 10/06/2012
not particularly... but wise enough to know that I often am, and to be able to admit it... ;)
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02:17 AM on 10/05/2012
I heard it on my car radio. Obama sounded dignified and intelligent, while Romney sounded hyper, stuttered and was nervous. When Romney said he would drop funding for PBS but said he still "loves big bird," it sounded incredibly stupid and dumb.
06:39 AM on 10/06/2012
Theda, you are sooooooooooo wrong . Learn to analyze --evidently that is hard for you to do.
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colonelsun68
Ready! Fire! Aim!
11:06 PM on 10/04/2012
Obama wasn't "clobbered". Romney looked more aggressive, even bullying at times. The President addressed Romney's dishonest claims, but not with the fervor that we would have liked to see. Remember, he's been dealing with teapublicon attacks every day for four solid years. No doubt he's tired. I'm also sure he didn't have days and weeks on end to be fed talking points like Mittens did. Mittens talked a lot but still did not provide any information. TAX RETURNS, MITT?
06:40 AM on 10/06/2012
Bullying????????? HAHAHA-- Just another lefty, huh sun?
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frank1946
Tell the Truth
10:32 PM on 10/04/2012
23,000,000 people out of work or underemployed.

1 % Growth will not solve the above.

DEMS have no idea how to grow beyond 1 % !

DEMS hate Business and Investment...............Tax Em' to Extinction.

Romney can and will spur investment and job creation.

Obama can't do it !
02:09 AM on 10/05/2012
You get an A in promoting talking points, BS and lies.
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02:34 AM on 10/05/2012
Well, in about a month we will know who won the election. In four years we will know if the GOP has succeeded in all that they have claimed they have all the answers for. If you think that all the world's problems will be solved by then by the results of this election, I hope you will not be disappointed. However, I would like to know what you will think if you turn out to be wrong. Who will you blame then? I suspect you are not likely to blame yourself for your choices. It seems to be a particular talent of those who think that bullet points, talking points and placing blame rather than proposing solutions provide real results... let alone substantive answers. Good luck to you, you will need it.
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secular666
I'm Jan Brewer & I approved this message.
09:14 PM on 10/04/2012
what a wasted of space column?

who here would switch positions with Obama electorally right now??

nobody - that's who...including whichever Romney shows up.

this was only a debate.

Nate Silver gives Romney less than a 20% chance of winning.

go ahead...take those odds over Obama - I dare ya.

forest through the trees people, forest through the trees.
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08:22 PM on 10/04/2012
Lack of voter objectivity is laughable when it's suggested Romney's success in Mass. was based, not on hard work and working accross the aisle, but signing whatever was put under his nose. He deserves credit where due whether the ideals were "progressive" as claimed or not, AND be acknowledged for working across the aisle, which unfortunately our President has refused to do.

The President would have had to be in the room to be "blindsided" as was also claimed but frankly all I could think of was Clint Eastwood's empty chair.

I acknowledge the President has done some good things that may have prevented a depression but they are in the end completely overshadowed by his divisiveness opposite the unity on all levels that he promised, the behind closed doors secrecy opposed to more transparency than any administration ever he said, and flat out lying to the people about something as literally deadly serious as Libya just to try and skate to the elections; it all tells me it's time to let someone else fill what through default has become an empty chair.
07:04 PM on 10/04/2012
Did this really change anyone's views as to how they are going to vote on November 6? If it did, then I truly do despair of our country and the way it is going. I'm not ever sure why we cling to these debates. It's not like we're living back before the Civil War when the Lincoln-Douglas debates took place, we are now not only in the age of the Internet, but of Twitter and every other instant gratification of what we now believe or not about the candidates.
02:12 AM on 10/05/2012
The format of the debates really needs to change or be abolished .