Obama Fails to Close the Deal in Knoxville

Posted December 30, 2007 | 02:51 PM (EST)



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Knoxville? No, I'm not talking Tennessee, but Knoxville, Iowa, a county seat, as well as home to 3M and Hormel plants and a VA hospital suffering from cutbacks. Barack Obama spoke Sunday to a room of 300 at Knoxville Middle School, where he tried to convince the many undecideds to caucus for him. The speech was classic Barack. Undoubtedly sensing that he had not closed the deal, Obama kept on, long past what sounded like a point of closure: "Bill Clinton was right then, and I'm right now."

Finally, Obama began to take questions. Out in the hall, his aides, now wearing Masonic-looking gold loyalty pins, talked on cellphones, flicked Blackberries or leaned against the concrete block wall for a few ZZZZs. Young white guys, hip in skinny jeans and pin-striped suit jackets, pushed in and out of the auditorium. As Obama took a question from a woman leaning towards Romney, an old woman out in the hall with the overflow crowd, with tears in her eyes, turned away, saying to her son, "I wanted to ask him my question." She is discouraged because she can no longer stand, and there is no room in the auditorium--although several of the press seats, in fact, are empty. There is something about this woman. I look around for Obama staff. All talking. I hurry after the woman and her son, tapping her on the shoulder. She turns to me, her bright blue eyes full. "I met FDR," she said. "I'm 85 years old, and I haven't seen anybody who measures up to FDR since then. Obama is our new FDR. He can be that. I just know it."

Turning the woman around, I hustle her back to the hall and approach Jen, an Obama aide from national headquarters. We had been talking minutes earlier. "Jen, here is woman who knew FDR and sees Obama as the new FDR. She has a great question for Obama. Can't you get her in to ask it?"

After some commotion, the old woman finally gets a seat, but she never gets a chance to ask her question. I know that because I see her later in McDonald's and ask.

This missed opportunity to hear from this woman, and to see how the exchange might influence people still on the fence about Obama, might not seem like such a big deal. But how many other people are showing up and not being inspired by these gatherings? Obama is in the race of his life. The Democrats are locked in a three-way race here in Iowa. Every caucuser counts.

It's not just the old woman who moves me. For the first time, here in Iowa, I begin to see the drawbacks for Obama of his superstardom. In the Knoxville Middle School auditorium, at least a quarter of the seats are press. So when Obama asks his audience, if they are undecided to raise their hands, and 40% of the room complies, that's a hefty number, even by my shaky math.

Later I ask Obama staff how many people the auditorium holds. Nobody knows. Finally, I get the information from a local woman. Seems like staff would want to be able to figure out how many undecideds are in the room, wouldn't you think?

So Obama has the mojo, with the cool young staffers and the CNN and CSPAN mobile trucks parked out front. But how many of these folk are going forth on a frosty night less than a week from now to help decide who is the next president of the United States?

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- Zennie See Profile I'm a Fan of Zennie permalink

Mayhill,

I think you, as I do, should state which candidate you prefer. It's not Obama; it's Clinton. You've angered many in the Obama camp because you quote what people say without using a note pad.

That's not good.

I'd take heed to what I'm explaining to you and try and either explain your bias, or be balanced.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 09:26 PM on 12/31/2007
- May2002 See Profile I'm a Fan of May2002 permalink

Obama 2008.

Stop the pattern of

Bush, Clinton, Clinton, Bush, Bush, Clintons, Clintons.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 03:15 PM on 12/31/2007
- esl See Profile I'm a Fan of esl permalink

Does the 25% of the audience that belongs to the press raise their hands? Are they part of the 40% who are undecided or are they part of the 60% that has decided on Obama? The press will not be voting in the caucus, will they? In my opinion Obama is closer to Kennedy than FDR, and we can't afford mistakes today like Kennedy made. I am beginning to think Obama is the Wizard of Oz, a lot of hullaballoo and razzle dazzle but pull the curtain back and what do you have?

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 02:17 PM on 12/31/2007
- Orikinla See Profile I'm a Fan of Orikinla permalink

Separate the fantasy from the reality.

This America in the 21st century.
Reality rules.

A true political strategist can tell you the final verdict, whether deals are closed or not.

Barack Obama is shadow boxing in Iowa.
He is the sparring partner of the real deal.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 02:11 PM on 12/31/2007
- IkeChicago See Profile I'm a Fan of IkeChicago permalink

Mayhill Fowler we owe you an apology and I'm formally apologizing on my own behalf. I failed to recognize that this blog was written from the prospective of the 85 year old grandmother.

Very clever, you happened to fool us all.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 07:53 AM on 12/31/2007
- RusStyles See Profile I'm a Fan of RusStyles permalink

Like many of the posters here, I find your headline out of alignment with the facts. A header such as: Obama Big Draw Has Drawbacks...would have been more appropos.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 01:18 AM on 12/31/2007
- IkeChicago See Profile I'm a Fan of IkeChicago permalink

Mayhill Fowler makes great leaps, woman goes away without asking her question. Conclusion Obama fails to seal the deal The moon is yellow. Conclusion, the moon is made of cheese.

Onto something more worthwhile, how could an Iowan be undecided after all the attention this state receives, I could see a Californian, but an Iowan. In Chicago there use to be voter undecided well into election day until the precinct captain came around and made his pitch. It was a simple one really, vote Democratic and he would seal the deal with a twenty in the top pocket. Simple but effective, maybe the Iowan need the same treatment?

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 12:41 AM on 12/31/2007
- cblcar See Profile I'm a Fan of cblcar permalink

Biden meets with crowds of 300, too, but he stays and talks to every single person, making sure every question is thoroughly answered and looking everyone square in the eye. Obama is all style and no substance. Wake up, people. The state of the world is just too precarious to vote for a rookie. Vote Biden '08.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 10:08 PM on 12/30/2007
- Ifeomamn See Profile I'm a Fan of Ifeomamn permalink

Mayhill you headline and the storyline does not make any sense. I believe you wanted to write a bad story about Obama. The problem is that the FACTS not there.....

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 09:42 PM on 12/30/2007
- RealOpinion08 See Profile I'm a Fan of RealOpinion08 permalink

I dont understand what the "deal" was in the first place. It sounds to me that she was already "closed" to me. I mean come on, how many people stand all day to shake the mans hand and dont get to? Does that mean that they are going to change the vote? Does that mean that he is ignoring them? No...

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 09:37 PM on 12/30/2007
- lafrance See Profile I'm a Fan of lafrance permalink

I would have loved to talk to that woman myself.
I am a big fan of FDR and have read several books on him.
I have to agree with that woman. While everyone is comparing Obama to JFK, I have seen, with the way the mood of the country is, the economic problems and the widening gap of rich and poor, that we are in for a new alinement.
I have seen Obama as the FDR figure. I have never seen anyone who you could say that about but, that has been my overriding feeling all year.
That is, if the democrats get their act together and out of the Clinton nostalgia fog.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 07:43 PM on 12/30/2007
- revoleurt See Profile I'm a Fan of revoleurt permalink

I guess Obama should take Hillary's position and make a longwinded Washington as usual speech and not allow the audience to ask any questions.

Obama 08!!

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 07:28 PM on 12/30/2007
- ButterflyWeed See Profile I'm a Fan of ButterflyWeed permalink

I understand the persoanl urge to change the course of history. The story of this octegenarian's commitment to touching history shouldn't be allowed to go unnoticed. It would be Senator Obama's privelege to meet her and I hope arrangements for their meeting can occur soon.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 07:10 PM on 12/30/2007
- RealBlackGirl See Profile I'm a Fan of RealBlackGirl permalink

I find the headline a little misleading. The old woman was already convinced. Unfortunately she didn't get to ask her question. Does that necessarily mean that she won't caucus for him? Did you ask her whether not being able to ask a question will cause her not to caucus? Let her do her convincing during the caucus when it counts the most.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 06:24 PM on 12/30/2007
- LeftLeanWing See Profile I'm a Fan of LeftLeanWing permalink

So it is your view that Obama didn't close the deal because he was not able to answer questions from everybody in the room.

You Stated:
"But how many other people are showing up and not being inspired by these gatherings?"

is this based on your witnessing one voter not getting to ask a question ?

"Obama Fails to Close the Deal in Knoxville"
Your analysis and conclusion is flawed.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 06:21 PM on 12/30/2007
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