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In Search of, Like, Eloquence: Language Zen for College Grads

Posted: 11/11/11 04:00 PM ET

Graduating seniors, I don't have to tell you it's a tough job market out there. But if you're ready for some hard work, I'm going to give you an edge over almost everyone else in your age group -- maybe over most people in any age group these days.

That gift is the gift of eloquence -- along with 20 or 30 IQ points and innumerable style points that are associated with it.  

Here's the beginner phase:  Drop the word like

Most of the time, you're using it pointlessly. You're using like as a placeholder, or as a shortcut.

Let's take a look at how you've been using it in everyday life:

You say, "My brother was, like, 'I'm going to leave now.'" You should have said, "My brother said 'I'm going to leave now," or perhaps "My brother was thinking he should leave."  You instead used a sloppy shortcut that only made you seem less literate.  

You say, "My doctor was, like, 12." You should have said, "My doctor seemed about 12."

You say, "I'm thinking of, like, getting some food." You should have said, "I'm thinking of getting some food."  The like was a stutter, a stammer, a placeholder while you gathered your thoughts.

And by using such teen Valley-speak, or Kardashian-speak, you dropped your IQ, in the minds of others, by no less than 20 points.  If you've got an IQ of 110, you now seem to be in the bottom half. If you've got an IQ of 140, your giftedness is mostly lost on others.  

You struggle to believe this, because even 50-year-olds freely drop like like breadcrumbs in the forest. Trust me, those old fogies are doing themselves a disservice; but at least they're not trying to establish a career, so the stakes aren't as high for them.  

Here's the issue:  If you're using the world like when it's not called for, your brain is scattered, and you're not being present in the moment.  You need to take a deep breath, slow your mind and your tongue down, and gather your thoughts. 

Now, when you come to a point where you don't know what to say, say nothing!  Exploit the power and drama of the pregnant pause before speaking again.  The energy you project in saying, "I'd love to....[silence]...meet you for coffee" is infinitely more powerful than the energy in saying, "I'd love to, like, meet you for coffee."

Plan on needing at least six months to purge useless likes from your system.

Try to go cold turkey on the word altogether if it helps you with the purging. Maybe stop saying "I like beer," and start saying "I love beer," if necessary or appropriate.  Stop hitting "like" on Facebook, just to avoid falling back into old patterns.  

After six months of your head hurting, and after endlessly popping quarters into the flub jar for saying like needlessly, you'll notice a marked improvement -- and better yet, you'll feel more mentally present and alert.  Trust me, employers and family members and prospective love interests will notice.

Now it's time for you to move to the intermediate phase of eloquence: Stop saying uh or um.

The same principle applies.  You're only muttering because you think that a mumbled uh is more acceptable than a momentary pause. You're quite wrong, it's the opposite, really. 

Don't kick yourself when you say uh -- just make a mental note that you need to take a deep breath again and slow your thoughts down.  Ironically, by slowing yourself down, you will seem less slow to others.  

After another six months, you will be ready for the advanced phase. Drop the word well, even when you're beginning a sentence.

Of all the many placeholders that we babble, well is the least problematic and the most defensible, as some sentences almost sound wrong if they aren't inaugurated with well. Watch your favorite TV show, especially a sitcom, and you'll notice that well kicks off most sentences.

But using well as an opening word, as a clearing of the throat, is a bit like the way a cartoon character runs in place before he takes off running. It's squandered and dissipated energy.  It lacks power and authority.

And if you tend to start sentences with well, you know, you can be certain that you're just spinning your wheels in neutral, in a mildly irritating way, while your brain fumbles in the dark to locate first gear.  The Great Communicator Ronald Reagan got away with this, but no one accused him of being a rocket scientist, and he had a lot more detractors in his day than you'd realize based on all the airports and buildings that bear his name now that nostalgia has defeated skepticism.  

Give yourself permission to pause, nay, force yourself to pause, until you know what you're going to say, then just say it.  And if you really need an opening word, try switching out from well to so or to now.  Choosing to make such a switch, within the moment, at least makes you more mentally present. And this displays a far more commanding energy than if you're reflexively and subconsciously spitting out well.  

The bombastic cormer Disney CEO Michael Eisner, when he was on top of the world, used to say that, "around here, a strong point of view is worth 80 IQ points."

There's truth to that. But if, uh, someone were to express her opinion, in, like a sort of, well, less than crisp manner, how could her point of view be seen as particularly strong?  

Eloquence is ultimately a zen thing.  It takes a zen mindset to clear out all the internal clatter and express your thoughts in a powerful and grounded way.  So once again, slow yourself down and start the difficult journey of finding an eloquence that's all too rare in our world.  It will give you a head start in your career that you'll thank me for later. 

And next time, I'll give you some more advice you really need to hear, about why middle-aged people who hire young people get annoyed when you confuse your with you're and you and I with me n' you.

 

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Graduating seniors, I don't have to tell you it's a tough job market out there. But if you're ready for some hard work, I'm going to give you an edge over almost everyone else in your age group -- may...
Graduating seniors, I don't have to tell you it's a tough job market out there. But if you're ready for some hard work, I'm going to give you an edge over almost everyone else in your age group -- may...
 
 
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09:00 AM on 11/17/2011
Graduating Seniors?

Incoming Freshmen!

Less is more...

It's never TOO early to start correcting bad habits.
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methodman
05:30 PM on 11/15/2011
Also try out your conversation on blending modes. I think it falls apart.
http://docs.gimp.org/en/gimp-concepts-layer-modes.html

Put one of your images on layer 1.
Put the other on layer 2.
Load the Pro Eraser Brush.
Set Bristle Size to 1.
Set Edge Softness to 0.
Set Sloppiness to 0.
Set Brush Size to as large as you need.
Set Brush Density to as high as you need.
Set Opacity to 100.
Use the Eraser Brush on layer 2 until you get the level of blend that you need.
Define these in your Topic Medium and try this method and see what happens.
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methodman
05:26 PM on 11/15/2011
Some other thoughts present in the moment. Let's talk this up. Really Creativity is the opposite. What is the Franca Lingua. Who close to where I live would have the most knowledge or my school is using this but I can only afford Photoimpact$20. Paintshop Pro $60 Twisted Brush like painter $99 Painter $129 Now my tutorials to teach me are all Photoshop so I have to translate Photoshop ideas into this menu system and palettes. Once you get things you can check and verify across many vendors and it is not as hard to find why some programs are more special than others. I don't think that is a bad thing. Real world experience encourages that gift to translate.
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methodman
05:21 PM on 11/15/2011
In Photoshop they would translate defensible to be a Mask. To protecting something. A masked font would get a magnetic edge assigned to it. In Twisted Brush a Painter like program they would call that same operation a Designer Brush. The point I am making is that there are many synonyms for things and you have to chart a toolbox and basic problem common sense first then go back and discover wow people surprisingly who are saying the same thing don't sound alike. This is all over the place so we have to deal with it to mark and make progress.
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methodman
05:16 PM on 11/15/2011
Also scattered suggests randomness. Maybe I 'm wrong but projects utilize spot memory tagged with in several categoies woriking together. When you are learning The challenges within a category aren't clear at all and I just randomly assing objects and verbs together from pertinant object, action another object influence with transparency tuned less. The surprise is unexpected rather then this stupid repetitious explicit learning smooth conversation that too many people know all the weasel words. I really get projects done. No I have no intention of talking smooth. I refuse to make my art look like Better homes and Garden NO thanks.
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methodman
05:11 PM on 11/15/2011
I am concerned that not enough patience from delineating processes is being developed. Edges belong to a part of two worlds. This delineation is necessary for creativity and our society demands knowledge coming from developing photoshop presentations. Because the methodology produces art within unexpected directions because you fuss with it. The same is said about math. It isn't that you are going to like math but it sets you up to task and gather things and cull out of it by bonding an unusual conversation that when stitched together hopefully finds an audience.
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02:12 PM on 11/15/2011
Channeling Lerner/Shaw/Lowe:
"Why can't the English teach their children how to speak?
Norwegians learn Norwegian, the Greeks are taught their Greek..
One common language I'm afraid we'll never get, Oh! Why can't the English learn to
Set a good example to people whose English is PAINFUL to their ears?
The Scots and the Irish leave you close to tears..
There even are places where English completely disappears!
In America they haven't used it for years!!"
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Evan Allison
03:54 AM on 11/15/2011
I can't help but be slightly unsettled by how proudly intolerant some people here seem to be when it comes to idiosyncrasies in speech. I had a fairly severe speech problem when I was young. I worked my way through as best as I could, however, I have a cousin who was never able to overcome his speech problem. He is a smart, likable person with much to contribute. However, he has been so thoroughly rejected by mainstream society that he never was able to move out on his own, get a steady job or start a serious relationship. When you insist on perfectly standardized language, you are also insisting on perfectly standardized thought. Who knows what ideas or people we will never experience all because we insist on communication being done one specific way.
08:52 PM on 11/14/2011
"Like" has become more annoying than profanity.
If texting encourages brevity perhaps they can lose it.
They're always going to be saying something when they're thinking nothing.
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USMAMule
01:34 PM on 11/14/2011
For God's sake, PLEASE stop referring to persons of the opposite sex as "males" and "females." Human beings at maturity are men and women. Juveniles of our species are boys and girls. Just like mature chickens are roosters or hens.

"Male" and "female" are generic descriptors of primary and secondary physical sexual characteristics. We are more than our naughty bits.
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bessielil
trying to organize hummingbirds
01:02 PM on 11/14/2011
Let's have a musical interlude with a Loudon Wainwright's ode to banishing 'like'. It's called Cobwebs.
Got to love a song about syntax. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNryxZhe7kA

excerpt: Yeah it might have started back with Jack Kerouac
Probably more than likely it was Maynard G. Krebs
It's the 4 letter word that used to mean 'as if'
And the meaning's covered in cobwebs
Cobwebs

Used to be a preposition then it was a conjunction
Now it's used as an audible pause
Oh I hate it when I hear it especially when I see it
Gotta stamp it out there ought to be some laws
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nmeemn
Sum, ergo cogito.
02:46 AM on 11/14/2011
"It is what it is."

Biggest pet peeve, EVER. What does that even mean????
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signgrrl
typeface geek
01:48 PM on 11/14/2011
MUST . . . . . FAN . . . . . . YOU . . . . . .RIGHT . . . . .. NOW . . . ..
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KGP
02:30 PM on 11/16/2011
UGH I hate when people say that! That and "Everything happens for a reason"
01:31 AM on 11/14/2011
I find that saying "Ah - " in place of "Um - " works well. I don't know why. Consider how intelligent I sound when I say "I prefer to - ah - read in bed" as opposed to "I prefer to - um - read in bed." The one subtly suggests a volume of Jacobean poetry, say. The other has a flavor of dog-eared tabloid. Related: it sounds quite respectable to say your foot hurts, but to say your feet hurt sounds smelly.
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papallugeteam
09:36 PM on 11/13/2011
I love this! Those are my big verbal pet peeves...when people use "like" when they mean "said," a puppy dies somewhere.
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Nopinky
09:16 PM on 11/13/2011
I've notice another tic, albeit most prevalent among interviewees on TV and news shows. They seem to have all decided that the answer to every question begins with "Listen." It sounds aggressive and condescending. It's started to sound like nails on a chalkboard to me, but it seems like it's only getting worse.