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Reforming the Way We Write About Reform, Education and More

Posted: 06/19/2012 4:12 pm

Several years ago, an older and wiser colleague of mine at the Milwaukee Journal Sentinel gently chided me for using the phrase "inner city" in my newspaper articles on Milwaukee's schools. My co-worker, Jamaal Abdul-Alim, pointed out that most of the neighborhoods and sections of Milwaukee to which I ascribed that label were not part of the city's core. If I meant low-income, predominantly black, high in crime, or some combination of all three, I should say so more plainly, he advised.

The exchange prompted me to think more explicitly about language as I wrote about education in the decade that followed. Some days, the pressure of deadlines made me negligent; and at least a few times I let simplistic, misleading, or jargon-laden language slip into my writing out of sheer laziness. But overall I believe Jamaal's comment helped make me a more deliberate and considerate writer.

I was reminded of the importance of language during a recent virtual discussion between reporters about the overuse, and misuse, of the term "reform" in education writing. Several journalists pointed out that labeling a change in policy or approach a "reform" (or an advocate of such change a "reformer") carries a positive connotation since the word means improvement. They expressed concern that journalists who use the term implicitly express support for a controversial education agenda -- including charter schools and linking teacher pay to student test scores.

Journalists should certainly strive to ensure they don't unthinkingly support a given political agenda through the appropriation of its rhetoric. But as the political debate surrounding public education grows more heated, I worry that we all -- journalists, educators, and policymakers included -- are missing the point when it comes to our words. The main reason we should be more scrupulous in using terms like "reform," "inner city," "value-added," "at risk," "learning deficit," or "overage" is not to avoid appearing complicit with a given agenda. We should eschew such terms because they undermine and devalue the primary mission of public education and the journalism that documents it: communicating with children and parents.

No thoughtful person would tell a mother: Your at-risk, overage child's failing school will be reformed, and value-added testing introduced, because of the students' many deficits. Yet the sum of our worst, laziest rhetoric can have that same effect. At best, such misguided language confuses families, leaving them disengaged. At worst, it offends and alienates families, leaving them enraged. Almost always, it erodes trust with public education's core constituency.

Just weeks before I had the conversation about the term "inner city," I wrote about a national effort to overhaul high schools by making them smaller. I decided to follow over the course of a year a struggling Milwaukee high school called North Division, the first in that city to be broken into smaller schools. In the first installment of the series, I wrote that students and teachers at North Division were "guinea pigs" in a nationwide push for smaller high schools. I thought nothing about the term until I learned, weeks later, that I had deeply offended many people in the North Division community by likening them to animals.

I had used "guinea pigs" as a figure of speech countless times. But through conversations with students and staff at North Division, I realized they viewed the term very differently: What I thought of as a flip cliche was to them yet another denigration of a school and community that had, for generations, been unfairly and sweepingly labelled as "violent," "failing," "notorious," "out of control," and  "dangerous." What's more, it conjured up a painful, not-too-distant history in which poor, black people were literally used as human subjects in unethical science experiments. I could rationalize forever about what I had meant -- and not meant -- by the words. But in the end, all that mattered was how they had been received.

This post ran at The Hechinger Report as part of an exclusive partnership.

 

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09:31 PM on 06/20/2012
All people writing about education should read this article. It's easy to become lazy and use language that has unintended consequences and the author's candor on this issue is uncommon and necessary. Thanks.
08:21 PM on 06/20/2012
Actually the deform we have now puts us back in the Stone Age before we had pedadogy,psychology, medicine, and sociology to understand how and why children learn. Just beat the kids and the teachers with tests and thinking that will change biological, neurological, sociological, and learning problems.
08:53 AM on 06/20/2012
Education "reform," currently, almost never is.
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P Alan Greene
07:09 AM on 06/20/2012
I appreciate the level of thoughtfulness behind this article. I wish more reporters displayed it.
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02:03 AM on 06/20/2012
funny you should mention the use of that particular language to describe the current wave of experimentation in education (or as i refer to it, marketing the re-invention of the wheel). a little less than half of charters are merely adequate, while less than a sixth of charters are significantly more successful than public schools that serve similar populations, even when judging by such limited and invalid comparisons as standardized test data.

regarding the remaining 37% of the charter movement, human subjects in unethical experiments is an apt description.
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jschuck
02:54 PM on 06/20/2012
Also, about a third of them go broke leaving students to scramble to get into another school during the school year. Why we believe that in education, unlike any other field, amateurs can do a better job that professionals is and always has been beyond me. Charter schools, as your statistics point out, are a myth kept alive by anecdotal experiences of a charter school here and there. One could do the same thing with public schools. As in all endeavors, some are excellent, some are bad and the rest are in between. After all, that is true of people and schools are run by people. Parents are generally the key to success or failure of a child in the education process. It's just easier to blame the teachers.