Obama's Inaugural Address Draws Some Criticism

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Huffington Post   |  Stuart Whatley   |   January 21, 2009 12:59 PM

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Despite the historically symbolic, hope-filled aura surrounding President Obama's inauguration, not everyone gave Obama's inaugural speech glowing reviews. For example, in an interview for radio KTAR, Senate Minority Whip Jon Kyl (R-AZ) describes Obama's inaugural address as "low brow". From KTAR:

Arizona Sen. Jon Kyl, second-ranking Republican in the Senate, was not impressed with President Barack Obama's inaugural address.


"His speech was not high-brow, it was more low-brow and a bit surprising in that regard," said the Senate Minority Whip.

Another nit-picker is former Bush speech-writer Michael Gerson, who describes Obama's speech in the Washington Post today as "cliched" and rife with platitudes. According to Gerson:

Given President Barack Obama's background, his inaugural address would have been memorable even if every word had been a Flag Day platitude. Unfortunately, too many of his words were platitudes.

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It is simply mysterious how such tired language could sound appropriate to the ear of Obama the writer. Some phrases were just strange. Recriminations have "strangled" our politics, as in some "CSI" episode. We have "tasted the bitter swill of civil war and segregation." Yuck, in so many ways.

Of course, reactions to Obama's address are inexorably subjective. Gerson has made a choice to lament the platitudes (which, when you really think about it, are the sine qua non of this traditionally inspirational moment). However Marc Ambinder points out that Obama is the first to ever use the word "data" and present statistics as a means for decision-making. Such invocations can hardly be viewed as overly-romantic platitudes.

National Review bloggers naturally took some shots at the speech, but they were surprisingly more ambivalent than outright negative in their response. Jay Nordlinger, who enumerates myriad thoughts here, seems somewhat incensed at what he perceives to be Obama's lack of respect for his illustrious predecessor, George Bush. Here are a few of his complaints:

I thought Obama did the minimum about Bush -- the barest minimum: "I thank him for his service," or something. He could have done a lot more: not with more words, but with better, truer, more gracious words. Bush has certainly done a lot. For one thing, he is passing on to his successor the means with which to fight the War on Terror.

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Obama talked about "restoring science to its rightful place." I thought that was a cheap, stupid shot. The opinion-makers will love it, of course.

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He suggested -- more like said -- that Bush had jettisoned American ideals in order to pursue security. That is a slander, pure and simple. Slandering your predecessor is not a good way to start a presidency.

Interestingly, those critical of Obama's speech hail not only from the right. John Judis from The New Republic professes underwhelmed disappointment, describing the speech as a "hodgepodge". According to Judis:

Barack Obama has the makings of a great orator, but his inaugural speech was not a great oration. It was well-delivered, but it consisted of a hodgepodge of themes, injunctions, and applause lines that did not speak directly to the crisis that the country faces.


The speech was unusually abstract. It lacked any reference to people or situations in the present. Obama was most vivid in describing moments long past--such as George Washington crossing the Delaware. Of course, an abstract speech can have its use if it is the service of compelling argument. But the concepts, and the argument on which the speech hung, were neither original nor compelling.

It is possible that this sense of anticlimactic disappointment was a self-fulfilling prophecy for some. Or for others, it may have resulted from the historically unprecedented hype in the weeks and days leading up to January 20th. With such a build-up, the bar was set extremely high, even for an accomplished orator like Obama.

Overall, from a quantitative perspective there seems to be more praise than criticism for Obama's inaugural address. Of course, it's impossible to please everyone -- as every individual observer has his own expectations and biases -- and the market place of ideas would hardly suffice without such reliable contrarians.

Despite the historically symbolic, hope-filled aura surrounding President Obama's inauguration, not everyone gave Obama's inaugural speech glowing reviews. For example, in an interview for radio KTAR...
Despite the historically symbolic, hope-filled aura surrounding President Obama's inauguration, not everyone gave Obama's inaugural speech glowing reviews. For example, in an interview for radio KTAR...
 
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- Aylah95 I'm a Fan of Aylah95 8 fans permalink

Bush had a speech writer?

I couldn't tell.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 05:40 PM on 01/22/2009
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Obama'sspeech spoke to every American not just selfish critics like those of his speech. Obama was saying that it wasn't the time to use dramatic expressons but to state in clear words what his inauguration meant to achieve. IT was a message to explain that we are all responsible in the all the days ahead to get this country back on its' feet. Shame on those who would take away the power of the message for a chance to only criticize and pick a part something that attempted to seriously instruct and inspire. There are times when eloquence is found in simplicity.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 01:45 PM on 01/22/2009
- jatkins I'm a Fan of jatkins 2 fans permalink

The errors of the Bush administration described in the speech are accurate and fair, and above all, lenient. Obama's predecessor is a war criminal, nothing less.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 07:25 AM on 01/22/2009

We have known all along that the GOP is nothing but black holes sucking in everything that the founding fathers built.

We now know what happens on the other side of black holes:

nothing.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 03:09 AM on 01/22/2009

The GOP better be careful what with sucking on so many sour grapes. One might just go down the wrong way.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 12:20 AM on 01/22/2009
- qxav949 I'm a Fan of qxav949 10 fans permalink

With the exception of the "other senator from Arizona," why exactly am I learning of these individuals for the first time?

Can anyone please explain why the works of these wordsmiths are yet to impact us as those of Mr. Obama have so done? We've seen the disasters wrought upon us by the mangled illogic of the ideological Bush-Gerson duo and it is likely the latter may soon reprise his role for a more worthy bumbler in the North while savoring grilled moose and the scenic views of Putin's rearing head.

Let 'em all follow Cheney's advice to Leahy and GO...

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 09:40 PM on 01/21/2009

Obama was just being PC. It was an awesome speech and just goes to show how intelligent he is. It was probably the most watched event in TV history,

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 08:52 PM on 01/21/2009
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Yes, I would like to see some global viewing numbers, if there are such things. Who cares what some repubs say about his speech, it was awesome, and Obama is already a great president.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 12:12 AM on 01/22/2009
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Bush's speech writer has the audacity to criticize a speech? Let me remind him of one of his lines...

"You may not have agreed with the decisions that I made, but you can surely agree that I was willing to make the tough decisions"

Wow - great line, profoundly profoundilating. No president ever had to make tough decisions.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 08:31 PM on 01/21/2009
- theone718 I'm a Fan of theone718 23 fans permalink
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For me I liked the speech when I heard it the first time. HOWEVER, when I heard it the first time, and realized just how deep and vivid and poetic some of his words were, I realized just what a masterpiece it was. I emplore you all listen to the speech again. The first time you hear something you think about other things, you try to listen fully but you just think about stuff like "WOW, HE IS OUR PRESIDENT" or "I know he is freezing cold right now". Listen to it again and then you can really tell how masterful it is.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 08:03 PM on 01/21/2009

Wow, Republicans overwhelmingly had a negative opinion of President Obama's speech. I'm shocked. Shocked, I tell you!!

Say it with me again people: President Obama. That's what the pugs are really upset about.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 06:32 PM on 01/21/2009
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Obama's speech was refreshingly sober, yet hopeful! It was confident and eloquent. I think this speech will get better reviews from historians than today's "pundits" and loudmouths.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 05:22 PM on 01/21/2009
- Blivet I'm a Fan of Blivet 7 fans permalink

If all these turkeys are so clever, why were they not giving an inaugural address instead of President Obama?

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 05:03 PM on 01/21/2009
- coot I'm a Fan of coot 3 fans permalink

Right, they are just green with jealous

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 07:47 PM on 01/21/2009
- zelduh I'm a Fan of zelduh 4 fans permalink
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They are simply jealous fools.

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 03:09 PM on 01/21/2009

The bankers getting into a hole and then getting us to bail them out seems childish and irresponsible to me.
I don't see "our collective failure to make hard choices" – what were we supposed to do?
People work so hard in the U.S. How is the fact that "health care is too costly" our fault?
Aren' we being tested enough?

When the levees broke, the government was SUPPOSED to act, that was a national disaster.
What is the role of government? Just wars and bailouts and taxing?

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 02:55 PM on 01/21/2009
- ENOS I'm a Fan of ENOS 6 fans permalink
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" the means with which to fight the War on Terror" HAHA.. Don't you know, there's nothing to fear but fear itself!

    Favorite    Flag as abusive Posted 02:39 PM on 01/21/2009
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