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Sarah Palin's Emails Written At 8th Grade Level -- Better Than Some CEOs

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First Posted: 06/13/11 10:19 AM ET Updated: 11/15/11 05:37 AM ET

The huge cache of Sarah Palin's emails released Friday offered not only a chance to see what she was writing about during her uncompleted term as Alaska's governor, but also an opportunity to see how well she writes.

AOL Weird News brought samples to two writing analysts who independently evaluated 24,000 pages of the former governor's emails. They came back in agreement that Palin composed her messages at an eighth-grade level, an excellent score for a chief executive, they said.

"I'm a centrist Democrat, and would have loved to support my hunch that Ms. Palin is illiterate," said 2tor Chief Executive Officer John Katzman.

"However, the emails say something else. Ms. Palin writes emails on her Blackberry at a grade level of 8.5.

"If she were a student and showing me her work, I'd say 'It's fine, clear writing,'" he said, admitting that emails he wrote scored lower than Palin's on the widely used Flesch-Kincaid readability test.

"She came in as a solid communicator," said Paul J.J. Payack, president of the Global Language Monitor. The emails registered as an 8.2 on his version of the test. "That's typical for a corporate executive."

An example of Palin's strongest writing came on Jul. 17, 2007 in an email to Lieutenant Governor Sean Parnell about the controversial Gravina Island Bridge, infamously called the "Bridge to Nowhere."

"We cant afford it, the Feds won't pay for it, the general populace isn't placing it as a high priority … can you diplomatically express that?! Of course we want infrastructure -- and this is NOT a "bridge to nowhere" (that is so offensive), but as it stands today with the highest-cost bridge design selected by the Ketchikan community, we need to find a lower-cost alternative [if] a bridge will be built."

"She's very concise. She gives clear orders. Her sentences and punctuations are logical," Payack said. "She has much more of a disciplined mind than she's given credit for."

Although it's like comparing apples to oranges, Payack said that famous speeches like Abraham Lincoln's Gettysburg Address was a 9.1 and Martin Luther King Jr.'s "I Have a Dream" oration rated a 8.8 on the scale.

The Palin emails offer a rare opportunity to see the digital internal communication of a public official. One of the few comparable scenarios was the release of the relatively slim 928-page assortment of former FEMA chief Michael Brown's emails from the days around the Hurricane Katrina catastrophe.

Payack and Katzman restricted their analysis to 60 randomly chosen messages that were at least one paragraph long. They were just 60 among the avalanche of documents released in response to freedom of information requests lodged when Palin was the relatively unknown running mate of Sen. John McCain in the 2008 presidential campaign.

Incoming messages to Palin's gov.sarah@yahoo.com account made up the bulk of the correspondence between December 2006 and September 2008, while the majority of notes Palin penned were too brief to use in the grade-level tests, the analysts said.

Many messages were conjured on her Blackberry, where Palin shortened words in a manner familiar to people who conduct business with their thumbs on a minuscule keypad.

"I'll ck w/Nizich on letter and fwd your ideas," she wrote to Parnell in September 2008 about a conversation he had with Mike Nizich, a former chief of staff to Palin.

Her characteristic down-home manner as the self-proclaimed "Mama Grizzly" that has endeared her to her base and been the subject of ridicule by her opponents shined through in an email from Jan. 2, 2007, soon after she moved into the governor's mansion.

"I am a hunter. I grew up hunting - some of my best memories growing up are of hunting with my dad to help feel [sic] our freezer," she wrote to aides on a bear hunting issue under debate.

But this was a rare example where Palin's writing style matched with the public persona of the rugged frontierswoman that Americans recognize from her recurring appearances on television.

"Given her portrayal of herself as very much an Alaskan I had expected to find a lot of 'Alaskanisms' in her emails," said University of Alaska, Anchorage English Professor David Bowie. "But there were actually very few."

The one regionalism Bowie noticed that popped up was Palin's use of the word "outside" for things beyond Alaska's borders.

[Editor's Note: In the interest of fairness, the writer submitted his own work for scrutiny. His recent piece, on a New York man trying to row across the Atlantic Ocean is on the 8.8 grade level, Payack said.]

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09:06 PM on 07/14/2011
The 8th grade level is far too low.
Think about it. At what level do you expect your children to be able to write? Certainly not the 8th grade.
That's when our really elderly relatives finished school, back when they worked on the farm too.

She should be able to write and communicate as if she finished college.

If she wants to be President, she should show traits that others aspire too - not a consistent level of mediocrity.
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08:51 AM on 07/16/2011
Obama's acceptance speech in Denver came in at a high 7th grade level.
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GraniteSkyline
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10:05 AM on 06/18/2011
I'd like a list, please, of all the CEOs who write worse than P@lin.
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01:02 PM on 06/16/2011
Another myth about Palin explodes on the leftist faces. Will they stop saying she is dumb, I doubt it.
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GraniteSkyline
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10:11 AM on 06/18/2011
Yippee she ain't duumb! She gots the smarts of an eighth grader!

So you would settle for an 8th grader as president?

May I present my son: He is 10 years old and reads and writes at the 10th grade level. By your standards he is a freaking genius! Look for him on the GOP campaign trail this year!
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12:27 PM on 06/18/2011
Unless you want her to write like Bill Buckley, 8th grader for email is good. It is precise and easily understood. Therefore everyone in government should be able to understand. Do you want her to use obscure words that people might misinterpret or have to look up in a dictionary. You might want a higher level for the New Yorker but not for government email.
09:34 PM on 06/18/2011
Granite, You have the reading comprehension of 3rd grader. They were not speaking of her intelligence level. They were speaking of her writing level.
01:18 PM on 06/15/2011
You are all misunderstanding what the grade level test is all about. Even the writers of this article didn't get it right!

FLESCH-KINCAID GRADE LEVEL TEST
"This test rates text on a U.S. school grade level. For example, a score of 8.0 means that an eighth grader can understand the document. For most documents, aim for a score of approximately 7.0 to 8.0"

It determines what grade level can grasp the information and understand it!
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01:25 PM on 06/16/2011
yes, yes, yes texass.....everyone is misunderestimating you and palin LMAO......how comical. by the way are they still (MIS) teaching the erroneous concept in texass schools that more guns = less crime when the FACTS show EXACTLY the opposite? More guns = more crime, more murders and more armed robberies!!! I could make some banal comment about the stereotypical gop rethugliclown, but I will refrain and allow you to take those low blows.....I just call em the way i see 'em!
12:26 PM on 06/22/2011
For what it's worth, I'm a Male from Texas and live in Texas.

I'm liberal, pro-equal rights for all (lgbt marriage), pro-women's rights (right to choose what happens to her own body), pro-separation of church & state, pro-civil rights, pro-individual liberty (but not to the point that my brains fall out - taxes and limited-government are necessary), pro-education & science.

I'm ethically opposed to religion, which is not to say it should be illegal. Don't care for sports (gasp). And I'm against the obscene human and civil rights abuses of the so-called "Drug War" that was initially racially motivated (see Harry Anslinger) and politically fueled by Richard Nixon who acted against his own commissioned report so he could start locking up "Hippies" who opposed him -- and has done little but feed trillions of dollars into the hands of the worlds most violent criminals and cause the US to be the world-leader in imprisoning our own peaceful citizens.

There are clearly issues with the current model of gun ownership in the US. While I'm ok with gun regulation I don't think we should make them illegal -- that seems an overly simplistic, knee-jerk reaction to the real problems which would likely result in unintended consequences. We must the right questions and then to fund the right people to help us answer them.

How's that for a Texas stereotype?
11:39 AM on 06/22/2011
The real problem is that using a scoring system based on ratios of words to sentences and syllables to words is virtually worthless. Writing with a score of 8.0 could be brilliant & profound or unintelligible. All it really says is did you use small words and short sentences. That's IT.

It scores "The tup made a sulcus in my aba." as a grade level of 2.2. I defy you to find a second grader who can tell you what it means. I doubt many college graduates could you tell you.

If you wanted a realistic scoring system you would need to start with a weighted vocabulary (which you could probably build from google data) combined with a syntax parser that ranks the complexity of the sentence structure. Even that would only get you a gross approximation.

Beyond that you have to start looking at idioms and concepts. For example, a sentence that describes how magnetism arises from relativistic field equations might use relatively simple words and a direct sentence structure but would require an advanced degree to understand it.

^^^^^ The above was Reading Ease: 60.6 / Grade Level 8.8

PS: I'm UBER-liberal - but these are just the facts. Reading this metric as "grade level" is a GROSS misrepresentation. It should be read as "8.0 approaches average English word and sentence length ratios" and nothing more.
10:23 AM on 06/15/2011
Stop blogging about this woman, she is not worth it. wow...liberals are falling into the trap.
09:35 AM on 06/15/2011
pretty soon, I think we are going to reach a point where the number of sarah palin stories reaches a critical mass that - by name recognition and star power alone - will ensure that she is given a spot on the national ticket, because, after all . . . .. she's sarah palin. what would happen if the endless stories just stopped? she writes like an eighth grader, she sends out e-mails, she rides around in a big bus, she might be ( is ) running for president, but then again, she might not. enough! treat her like tim pawlenty, or michele bachmann, or any other candidate. if she enters the race, and has something political to say, just give her equal time, and be done with it.
08:51 AM on 06/15/2011
What a relief! Someone finally found something with which to gig Palin. Looks like it wasn't a wasted effort after all. I'm also eagerly awaiting the review of all the Barack Obama writings from Columbia and Harvard Law. Oh wait... Maybe they would reveal an unaccomplished entitlement baby operating at a 5th grade level, or maybe a true genius. We'll never know will we?
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09:54 PM on 06/14/2011
And my post was illiterate - iPad keyboard leaves much to be desired. Note to self - triple check before pressing POST COMMENT button.
07:39 PM on 06/14/2011
Who cares? You're worried about someone using an evolved form of communication? Palin is being realistic.
03:34 PM on 06/14/2011
How many people wite email at the same level that they would write an essay, a business letter, or any other important document? Yes, she had errors that would have given her a low grade if she had been in my fifth grade, but this is email. That is somewhat like reading blog comments. Most of them would receive an F grade in grammar and spelling. The author, as the liberals, will try anything to discredit this woman. Maybe they need something more important to do such as getting a real job!
08:20 AM on 06/15/2011
One thing is indisputably true about Sara Palin...Their fear and hatred of her served to clearly reveal the now undeniable bias of America's leftist, socialist media...
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11:34 PM on 07/14/2011
Is that where the 'Fair & Balanced' tag comes from? The other side is biased and reports things wrong, so Fox reports them in a biased, incorrect but equal way? ;)
08:52 AM on 06/15/2011
I agree.
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03:30 PM on 06/14/2011
Bill Clinton's speeches were at the same level. They are all ldl0ts
02:46 PM on 06/14/2011
Over a hundred years ago when I was in 8th grade, I tested at a 12th grade (12.3 to be exact) level when it came to English reading/writing skills. I should also mention that English is NOT my first language and not the language I spoke at home. I would like to thank all my teachers in grade school for teaching me how to communicate correctly!!! Thank you teachers!!!

However, I would be embarrassed if I were to be a "politician" and was graded at an 8th grade level.
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11:55 AM on 06/15/2011
I guess you hit your peak at 8th grade. I just plugged your post into an online Flesch-Kincaid tester and it came out at 6th grade level.
12:09 PM on 06/14/2011
What is the point of this article, other than another cheap attempt to attract readers to a sparsely read website. Mention Sarah Palin, and the left will come running, sword in hand. I'm not a Palin fan, but these stories border on lunacy.
02:02 PM on 06/14/2011
@Marty Albertsen, I paid $32.67 for a XBOX 360 and my mom got a 17 inch Toshiba laptop for $94.83 being delivered to our house tomorrow by FedEX. I will never again pay expensive retail prices at stores. I even sold a 46 inch HDTV to my boss for $650 and it only cost me $52.78 to get. Here is the website we using to get all this stuff, EatBids.com
12:07 PM on 06/14/2011
I find the Editor's note hilarious. Comparing the Emails to an excercise in creative writing. Kind of like compairing a grocery list with a corporate memo isn't it?
12:03 PM on 06/14/2011
This is the best they can come up with and call news?
I'm betting you take the great majority of all the emails generated by the staff of the news agency that sanctioned this article...you'll get no better results if not worse.