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Feeding School Kids Sugar Coated Irony

Posted: 11/29/07 11:22 PM ET

I have a younger sister almost twenty years my junior that is currently enrolled in the public education system. She called me recently, asking for help on a persuasive essay she'd been assigned for homework.

"We have to talk about why or why not vending machines should be in schools," she explained. She knows that I've spent the last year working on a documentary about the American obesity epidemic ( Killer At Large) and so I was the first person she thought to ask. "I know you don't think there should be vending machines in schools, but why?"

I gave her the three points I believed most, "Well, first off, obesity. Kids are more overweight and obese now than they've ever been. Secondly, type 2 diabetes is running rampant among kids your age. The last big thing is that sugar and junk food makes kids hyper and makes it harder for them to concentrate."

"Hmmm," she replied.

"Don't take my word for it. Use those points as a jumping off point for research and then let me take a look at your paper."

"Okay," she said and the next time I spoke to her about it was a couple of days later when she had her rough draft. She showed me a fairly well-written five paragraph essay (for a sixth-grader) about why she felt vending machines should be removed from schools.

"Vending machines," her essay concluded, "help promote an unhealthy lifestyle causing more children to be obese. Without vending machines, obesity would not be as common as it has become. Vending machines contribute to higher diagnoses among children for type 2 diabetes because children can not regulate their junk food intake. Vending machines restrict learning because of hyperactivity. If you're too bouncy on sugar, you're not going to sit in class and learn anything."

After they talked about it in class, my sister told me that three-quarters of her classmates agreed with her when their teacher asked if they should take vending machines out of schools. Quite encouraging.

Then they turned in their papers for grading.

A few weeks went by and my sister wanted to show me her graded essay. She'd gotten 50 points out of a possible 50. "Great ideas," her teacher wrote, "I love how much research you did, these are great points."

"Great job," I told her.

It would seem as though the tide is turning in the battle against obesity in schools.

You'd hope, but it shocked me to find that the teacher had stapled to the front of this anti-junk food essay a coupon worth a free order of Cinna Stix at Domino's Pizza. On the front of the coupon was written, "In recognition of a professional, persuasive essay."

An order of Cinna Stix is almost 1,200 calories (plus an extra 250 for the dipping sauce). My sister is 11 years old and is recommended to eat about 1,600 calories each day total. Hardly an appropriate reward.

I suppose her essay wasn't persuasive enough.

 
 
 

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10:43 PM on 11/30/2007
My daughter is currently on a crusade in her HS to try to get more vegetarian fare. Though she is not vegetarian-she's cutting back on redmeat. She says all of her friends are vegetarian-and that they bought lunch. She said they ate cheese pizza and french fries EVERYDAY- (this is what they considered vegetarian, saying there were little other choices.)
We have a neighbor who's a beekeeper-so she's going to ask him about contacting local farmers (that his bees pollinate)to possibly get some discounts on thier produce for their school.
There seems to be alot of redtape that schools have to go through to implement change in menu.
She's starting with a petition for kids to sign-for more vegi cuisine.
We'll see how it goes.
07:13 PM on 11/30/2007
I travel, alot, and see with my own eyes that Americans are the fatest people anywhere.

And I dont attribute this to calorie intake alone. We are the only nation with corn syrup, and high fructose corn syrup added to almost every conventional food product.

We are also the only nation that thinks it is acceptable to ingest hormones, steroids, arsenic and antibiotics with a serving of meat. The EU and Japan refuse to import our meat products for this reason.

Scientists are saying this may be a cause of the phenomenon of early childhood puberty being seen in America.

Africa recently turned down a shipment of American Genetically Modified corn.

Americans are the guinea pigs of the world. Big agricultural practices are poisoning our food in America.

Buy local food and buy organic, buy free range and chemical free meats and milk.

And watch the movie "The Future of Food", to really understand what is happening to Americans.

Even starving Africans dont want to eat the crap we feed our children.
12:02 PM on 11/30/2007
Wait a second, what about personal choice and responsibility? No one forces those children to pay for the snacks from the vending machine, and if they are spending thier lunch money on that instead of food then there is a parenting problem. As for the cinna stix, when is the last time you sat around and ate all of them by your self. More than likely you shared them and only ate a fraction of those caliores you bemoan so much.
09:18 AM on 11/30/2007
In recent decades obesity among adults has doubled but that among children has tripled. Children apparently copy adults and improve on the original.
I have read that in 1960 the average American was 20 pounds lighter than his counterpart is now. I can remember the sixties quite well. A lot of people ate what may be called an eggs-and-buttered toast, meat-and-two-vegetables diet, quite a few smoked (some while giving a lecture), but they walked about more (and you had to get up to switch television channels), and went to libraries instead of websurfing.
06:09 AM on 11/30/2007
And don't forget that cosumption of soda containing phosphates blocks absorbtion of calcium. The most important time for the body to build bone mass is during childhood and adolesence. Blocking calcium at that time leads to greater risk of ostioperosis.