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How to Write a Eulogy: A Final Gift To A Loved One

Posted: 03/16/11 11:27 PM ET

After polls determined that our number one fear is public speaking -- topping even death -- writer Peggy Noonan observed the implications: at a funeral, most of us would prefer lying in the coffin to standing at the lectern. Will you be ready when your time comes (to deliver a eulogy)? This particular speech is doubly daunting because a grief-stricken friend or loved one will ask you to do it, on very short notice. It helps if you don't think of eulogy as a performance art, but as a gift. You are not expected to replicate televised eulogies given by professional entertainers and politicians. Your task is to console, not to entertain -- though sharing amusing memories may be a welcome part of what you offer.

Reading your eulogy is appropriate and expected, so write it out. Start by considering what you cherish about your subject. This might involve how the deceased looked. No detail is too small. Novelist Katherine Anne Porter's tribute to her colleague Flannery O'Connor, who died at age 39 of lupus, captured a precise image: "I want to tell what she looked like and how she carried herself and how she sounded standing balanced lightly on her aluminum crutches, whistling to her peacocks, who came floating and rustling to her, calling in their rusty voices."
Eulogist Mario T. Garcia offered a visual portrait of César Chávez addressing a privileged Yale University audience, an image very different from the dynamic civil rights leaders of his era: "Here was César, a small, Indian-looking, modest leader of farm workers with his usual checkered shirt, the kind you buy at Penney's or Sears. He was a humble farm worker with little education, who spoke softly and with little emotion. It was hard to believe that he was one of the most important labor leaders in the country's history."

Stanford Professor Tobias Wolff recalled his fellow writer/teacher Andre Dubus, clad in a U.S. Marines tee-shirt and a Rambo headband, jerking his wheelchair around a room: "Andre had about him a loud blustering maleness -- one of my sons, then quite young, called him Yosemite Sam."

Expand your memories to consider what a novelist might call an elucidating moment. Did your subject ever say anything that revealed the essence of who (s)he was? Eulogist John Taylor recalled maxims his brother, Major David G. Taylor, often recited before he was killed in Iraq: "Life isn't fair -- get over it. No whining. You are probably not entitled to anything you didn't work for. Freedom isn't free, someone has to pay the price, and it might as well be you."
Speaking at the funeral of the witty host of PBS-TV's "Firing Line," William F. Buckley, Jr., his son Christopher's anecdote evoked loving laughter: "I was with him in Connecticut ... last October at a fundraiser for the local library, billed as 'A Bevy of Buckleys.' An article had appeared in the local paper, alerting the community ... My eyes alighted on the sentence: 'The Buckleys are a well-known American family, William F. Buckley being arguably the best known.' I handed [him] the clipping and waited for the reaction I knew would come. Sure enough within seconds, he looked up with what I would describe as only faintly bemused indignation and said, 'Ar-guably?'"

Jim Forest's tribute to activist Dorothy Day, revealed that virtuous people -- even pacifists -- can have sharp edges. He recalled some typical Day retorts: after someone told her she was too hot-headed, Day shot back: "I hold more temper in one minute than you will hold in your entire life." When a journalist who told her it was the first time he had interviewed a saint, she snapped, "Don't call me a saint -- I don't want to be dismissed that easily."

A reminder of the faith or wisdom that influenced the deceased can be the best way to summarize the meaning of a life. At a eulogy for New York Giants owner Wellington Mara, his son John recalled that after a string of losses a sportswriter -- referring to the elder Mara --asked : "What can you expect of an Irishman named Wellington, whose father was a bookmaker?" The sting from that was still fresh a few days later when Mara decided to answer that question at a kickoff luncheon:

"I'll tell you what you can expect. You can expect anything he says or writes may be repeated aloud in your own home in front of your own children. You can believe that he was taught to love and respect all mankind, but to fear no man. And you could believe that his abiding ambitions were to pass onto his family the true richness of the inheritance he received from this father, the bookmaker: the knowledge and love and fear of God, and second to give you (our fans and our coach) a Super Bowl winner."

Former Speaker of the House Tip O'Neill's granddaughter Catlin said it all when she told mourners that O'Neill called the Sermon on the Mount "the best political speech ever written." She then read that section of the Gospel of Matthew, known as the Beatitudes.

Finally, keep it short. A brief, well-thought-out eulogy that acknowledges even one trait you cherished about the deceased will be appreciated far more than the kind of long, rambling tribute that invariably begins focusing on the speaker rather than his subject. Your heartfelt remembrance, simply told, is one of the sweetest gifts you can give, because it calls for grace under pressure, and usually courage. You have said yes to comforting those who mourn, even as you are one of them.

Carol DeChant is the editor of the new book, 'Great American Catholic Eulogies'.

 
 
 
After polls determined that our number one fear is public speaking -- topping even death -- writer Peggy Noonan observed the implications: at a funeral, most of us would prefer lying in the coffin to...
After polls determined that our number one fear is public speaking -- topping even death -- writer Peggy Noonan observed the implications: at a funeral, most of us would prefer lying in the coffin to...
 
 
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Lisa Shields
Poet & Advocate For Special Needs Children
08:42 AM on 03/23/2011
When a dear friend , Tony Spivey died several years back, I was asked to give part of his eulogy.

Tony was a teacher, a retired marine, and also a brilliant poet. Two of his cousins were Baptist Ministers, and I knew they would amply cover that end...but I pondered about what I could offer to the mix. I was Tony's friend, and publicist...so finally I wrote about his skill with poetry, of the admiration so many expressed for him personally...and also his wonderful sense of humor. There truly was an embarrassment of riches to draw from, and i later heard that his friends and family were fascinated to hear about that area of his life.

I felt honored to be able to give so fine a person his last send off...and it helped me to say goodbye as well.
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HawaiiShira
He that knows & knows he knows is wise.
03:59 PM on 03/19/2011
When I moved to Hawaii almost six years ago, there were tears & joy. Knowing my parents were in their 80's, I decided one day after a phone call with my mother, & after expressing some concern for my father's health, I made a decision that will forever make me glad.

My mother had a saying, "Give me my flowers while I can smell them." My father, being a retired pastor, & having delivered many eulogies at their friends & peers funerals, she had determined she would no longer go to funerals. I sat down and wrote a letter to them expressing my love, but more importantly recounting special childhood memories, reminding them that any failures of their offspring were not their failings as parents and delivering to them their eulogies that not one minister or bishop, friend, relative or neighbor could. More importantly, they got to get their flowers while they could smell them.

Three years ago, I was privileged to care for my mother for five months before her succumbing to congestive heart failure. It was then she thanked me for "the letter". When my siblings requested I write her eulogy, I looked high & low for the letter, without success. Then I came to the realization that it was unnecessary, because the people who needed to hear it had already. I quickly wrote something appropriate for the cemetery burial service. When it is my father's time, perhaps the letter will be found & if siblings choose, can
IThinkthereforeImLiberal
Micro-sofa, where do you want to sit today?
11:41 PM on 03/17/2011
I struggled to write eulogy for my mom. In the end I did what she always loved me to do, and that was sing her a song. I ended up singing "Thumbing my way back to heaven" by Pearl Jam, and I did it with just her coffin and myself. She was my hero, and my best friend. We had gone through so much together when I was young (we were hit head on by a drunk driver when I was five. It killed my father, and came close to killing us). I kept thinking of all the life she passed up to raise the six of us, and that's why I chose that song. After I had finished, I gave her coffin a kiss, and walked the twelve miles home. During that walk I decided that the best eulogy I could give her was to live the values she spent a lifetime teaching me. One day when I get to meet her again, I hope to be able to look her in the eyes and say I tried my best, I hope it was enough.
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topkatnc
Give a stray cat or dog a chance .
08:41 AM on 03/18/2011
I too was blessed to have wonderful mother ... I wish everyone was ... thank you for sharing such a sweet story ....
04:44 PM on 03/25/2011
What a perfect eulogy for the one most dear to you....using your talent in tribute to all that she was to you, and no doubt others. I can't think of anything better than that to the one who gave birth to you.
03:02 PM on 03/17/2011
The eulogy I presented for my father in law when he passed truly came from my heart. I truly loved him like a dad and reading this article brought back the grief I had to withhold at the time to present to family and friends who he truly was. Unintentionally I recieved alot of gratitude and thanks for reminding them about who hi was. Thank you for such a great article.
04:47 PM on 03/25/2011
Thank you for sharing such a touching example of how a person has to perhaps force him- or herself to give a eulogy at a time of personal grief, but how doing so is a treasured gift to others who shared your love for him.
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02:58 PM on 03/17/2011
A eulogy is a very nice gesture to do on behalf of the departed. If you're catholic though, you will not be allowed to give a eulogy during the funeral mass unless:

1. there are numerous television cameras in the church
2. you've given a huge chunk of change to the parish

so even if you've been say, a 60-year member of the same church, you're not entitled to ten minutes of some nice words in your honour. You wait for the funeral breakfast like everyone else who doesn't fall under item 1 or 2.
06:28 PM on 03/17/2011
If the deceased committed suicide, the Catholic church will not allow a funeral in the church, so the issue is moot.

The Catholic church does not subscribe to Sola Scriptura, but rather abides by the "traditions" it has developed over the centuries, even though they may have no basis in the Bible, such as the notion that suicide is an unforgivable sin that condemns the individual to hell.
07:24 PM on 03/17/2011
Sounds like there is some pain somewhere in the background. I am sorry for that. Whatever the enterprise, sad to say, local power politics can sometimes get in the way of the right thing to do. At my sister-in-law's RC funeral mass, I (not RC) gave a eulogy at my widowed brother's (also not RC) request; no camera's, no money involved.
dmac
I'll explain later.
02:10 PM on 03/17/2011
AttheFuneral, MarkTwain

â– Do notcriticize the person in whosehonor the entertainment is given.


â– Make no remarks about his equipment. If the handles are plated, it isbest to seem to not notice.

â– If the odor of the flowers is too oppressive for your comfort, remember that they were not brought there for you, and that the person for whom they were brought suffers no inconveniencefrom their presence.


â– Listen, with as intense an expression of attention as youcan command, to the officialstatement of the character and history of the person in whose honor the entertainment is given; and if these statistics should seem to fail to tally with the facts, in places, donot nudge yourneighbor, or press your foot upon his toes, or manifest by any other sign, your awareness that taffy is being distributed.


â– If the official hopes expressedconcerning the person in whosehonor the entertainment is given are known by you to be oversized, let is pass... donot interrupt.


â– At the moving passages, bemoved but only accordingto the degree of your intimacywith the parties giving the entertainment, or with the party in whosehonor the entertainment is given. Where a blood relation sobs, an intimate friend should choke up, a distant acquaintance should sigh, a stranger shouldmerely fumble sympathetically with his or her handkerchief.Where the occasion is military, the emotions should be graded according to themilitary rank, the highest officerpresent takingprecedence in emotional violence, and the rest modifying their feelings according to their position inthe service.


â– Do not bring your dog.
04:48 PM on 03/25/2011
I can't believe I missed this in all of my reading of Twain, but I love it and have now passed it on to others. Thanks.
New Yorker
Roman Catholic, Anti-DEATH, Combat Vet, Sinner
10:44 AM on 03/17/2011
God judges the true worth of a life after death. I never once heard a family member deliver a eulogy for a dead relative. If the person's life was good his friends and relatives will already know that, and it isn't like the deceased can hear the words said about him anyway.
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OuterBanx North12
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02:54 PM on 03/17/2011
so have you ever actually converted anyone on this site to your faith???
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topkatnc
Give a stray cat or dog a chance .
08:51 AM on 03/18/2011
What a thing to say .... yeah .. you will be judged with an attitude like that ....
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Indigo1941
Time traveler.
08:54 AM on 03/17/2011
Upon the occasion of the passing of one of my solemn, rural Hoosier aunts, the newly appointed Methodist minister who hadn't bothered to visit her before she passed but presided at the funeral anyhow, walked to the pulpit with that arrogant-young-minister walk and called for friends and relatives to rise and speak their eulogies from the heart in honor of the deceased octogenarian. My solemn, rural Hoosier family sat in solemn silence a good long while, waiting for the minister to recognize his responsibilities and do his job. He didn't last long at that church. Did I mention the Methodist bishop was in attendance?

Moral of the story? The eulogy is the minister's job.
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thinkingwomanmillstone
great, green, globs of greasy grimey GOPerspeak.
06:57 PM on 03/18/2011
so you just sat ther in your smugness and let him suffer and didn't offer him any help at all....how kind. Charity and kindness is everybody's job.....I would think it would be doubly so in church.
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Indigo1941
Time traveler.
08:33 PM on 03/18/2011
If he can't do his job, let him find work he can do.
03:30 PM on 03/22/2011
You say the Methodist bishop was in attendance. Let me explain to you what that means: the young pastor had tried and tried to explain to the cabinet about your family, how this family despite centuries of Methodist theology to the contrary, thought of the pastor as some sort of employee. "No SERIOUSLY, Bishop, I'm completely serious, come to this funeral and watch how they just sit there like a bump on a log!" And in answer to the ceaseless prayers of the pastor and in consulation with the DS, "he didn't last long at that church."

Moral of the story, if you want to honor a deceased octogenarian, perhaps a funeral in the church is not the best venue for your family.
01:25 AM on 03/17/2011
I watched Seinfeld too Ms. Dechant.
12:21 AM on 03/17/2011
a best eulogy is a spontaneous speech coming from the heart, delivered soulfully by the beloved of the departed.

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11:57 PM on 03/16/2011
When writing or remembering the death of a loved one. It comes very easily to me. Ive written and read eulogies for my Mother and Father. I was told I wrote very touching tributes. I always remember the wonderful things about them that meant so much to me, And how they touched others lives also. I dont make It all sugary and phoney. but If someone was sarcastic, or bitchy at times, I will mention It, But try to do It Humouously! I find It cathartic for me. For It Is a final tribute to the people that meant so much In my life and the lives of others!
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RButler
I've always wanted to have everything I wanted
11:29 PM on 03/16/2011
I recall of friend struggling to come up with a eulogy in a hurry and said something about wishing she had 'Eulogy Wizard' on her PC.