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When a Novel's Main Character Is Unlikable

Posted: 12/29/11 11:18 AM ET

With all the bad people in real-life politics and big business, do we really want to read about bad people in novels?

It's one thing if a hateful book inhabitant is a crucial but secondary character who might serve as a foil to an appealing main character. For instance, it's impossible to imagine J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter books without the ominous Lord Voldemort. But what if He Who Must Not Be Named But I Just Did had been the primary protagonist rather than the affable, courageous Boy Who Lived? Ouch!

Yet the world has plenty of evil, so why shouldn't some novels reflect this with a loathsome lead character? And, if done right, such books can be quite absorbing. A good example is Edith Wharton's The Custom of the Country, which focuses on the beautiful but heartless, shallow, materialistic, social-climbing, never-satisfied Undine Spragg.

Undine has almost no redeeming qualities, yet -- partly for that reason -- The Custom of the Country is a fascinating read. I just finished the 1913 novel, and my eyes practically bulged as I waited to see what this amoral person would do next. Adding to the interest was the way Wharton used Ms. Spragg to symbolize the dearth of ethics among many of America's rich (I'm sure the character's "U.S." initials were not a coincidence).

What also made the novel compelling was that Wharton provided at least some explanation for why Undine turned out the way she did (her weak-willed parents were much too doting and women had limited options in those days). Also, the author gave readers a few sympathetic supporting players to glom on to -- especially the sensitive Ralph Marvell, one of Undine's husbands.

In short, The Custom of the Country is almost a case study in how to make a book that stars a bad person a satisfying book to read.

And if loathsome literary leads get their comeuppance, well, that's very satisfying. (I won't say if that happened to Undine, in case you haven't read the book.)

Wharton's novel made me try to think of other titles with totally or mostly unlikable stars. Three that immediately came to mind were the "murderers' row" of Bret Easton Ellis' American Psycho, Norman Mailer's The Executioner's Song, and Thomas Harris' The Silence of the Lambs. But I haven't read those books, so I can't say much about them.

There's also Gone With the Wind, though the not-nice Scarlett O'Hara does have that admirable "I will survive" thing going.

Becky Sharp in Vanity Fair? It's been a long time since I read William Thackeray's novel, but I think Ms. Sharp had a decent quality or two. Octave Mouret in Emile Zola's Ladies' Delight? He's a retail magnate from hell, but -- unlike Ms. Spragg -- he could genuinely fall in love and appreciate the person he fell in love with (the not-wealthy Denise Baudu).

Captain Ahab in Moby-Dick? This maimed, obsessed character is more tragic than rotten. And one could argue that the star (or at least co-star) of Herman Melville's classic novel is the narrator Ishmael, who I can imagine saying: "Call me likable."

Then there's a novel with a fairly unlikable narrator but a sympathetic star. That book is Junot Diaz's The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao, which features the womanizing, often-selfish Yunior telling the story of the troubled but lovable nerd Oscar.

The Robber Bride (Zenia) in Margaret Atwood's The Robber Bride? She's certainly one nasty, scheming person, but the three women (Tony, Charis, and Roz) she treats so badly are the novel's stars.

How about the stars of some Cormac McCarthy books? Anton Chigurh in No Country for Old Men is monstrous, but he's one of several main characters. "The kid" in McCarthy's Blood Meridian arguably has top billing -- and he can be violent. But he's somewhat more sympathetic than the vicious men he goes marauding with. That said, it's hard to find a better novel featuring such an unlikable cast.

Amir in Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner? He certainly does some hateful things to his friend Hassan, but eventually makes up for it to a certain extent. The book's real villain is the Taliban sociopath Assef, but he's a secondary presence.

Then there are the characters who start off relatively sympathetic but lose their moral bearings, as with the Huey Long-like Willie Stark in Robert Penn Warren's All the King's Men. "Absolute power corrupts absolutely," and all that.

In short, I'm having trouble coming up with many great novels starring (not just co-starring) a person who is totally or mostly hateful. Can you name any books that fit this category? And how do you feel about novels with an unlikable lead character?

 
 
 
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07:19 PM on 01/07/2012
There's nothing to like in Ignatius from "A Confederacy of Dunces," but I'd be damned if that novel wasn't great fun!
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Dave Astor
09:58 PM on 01/07/2012
Another example of how a novel can be great despite (or because of!) an unlikable character. Thank you very much for commenting, Rolando!
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03:39 PM on 01/04/2012
Also you can say hey my life is complicated sometimes but at least I don't have to deal with that person...
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03:39 PM on 01/04/2012
eh i like bad characters sometimes they are more interesting than the good guys. if they are written well. I especially like when they have a good back story. But you have to have a lot of characters that are good and likeable too , so the book keeps you interested.
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Dave Astor
05:10 PM on 01/04/2012
Thanks for your two comments, dahpunkster! Yes, unlikable characters can sometimes be more interesting than unlikable ones, and I also prefer unlikable people to be fictional rather than real! If only some GOP presidential candidates were solely imaginary....
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Dave Astor
07:04 PM on 01/04/2012
In my above reply, the second "unlikable" should be "likable"!
03:02 PM on 01/03/2012
Hi Dave - I can think of a few example authors but my favorite is Stephen King. In many of his novels there are both likable and unlikable main characters, that's what makes Mr. King so good. "The Stand" is my favorite King novel, and there are very unlikable characters given lots of pages, including especially Harold Lauder, Nadine Cross, and "Trashcan Man." There were also General Starkey and other absolutely hate-able minor characters given significant space. In Mr. King's "Wizard and Glass," the unlikable characters - including Jonas, Reynolds, DePape, Rhea, and others - get as many pages than the likable characters. I say "Wizard and Glass" is a masterpiece in part because of that.

In "The Stand," I found Larry Underwood unlikable, which opens up another question: If an individual reader finds a particular major character unlikable (who maybe was intended by the author to be likable), how does that affect said reader?

There's also the question: If a character "objectively" ought to be unlikable but the author gives him/her depth and complexity, don't we as readers tend to like them anyhow?
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Dave Astor
03:36 PM on 01/03/2012
Thanks so much, Id, for bringing up Stephen King! You're definitely an expert on his wonderful work! I've read perhaps a dozen of King's many, many books, and I can remember some less-than-nice major characters.

(As an aside, I'm actually a big fan of "From a Buick 8," though I realize it's not one of King's more-famous titles.)

You asked two excellent questions, and I think they were at least partly answered by some of the earlier commenters. It's great when an author gives an unlikable character some depth and complexity. I'm not sure it always makes a reader like that unlikable character more, but it certainly helps a reader understand that character and perhaps have some sympathy for that character.
12:28 PM on 01/03/2012
Good call on Patrick Bateman of American Psycho & Hannibal Lecter of Silence of the Lambs. Lecter dominated the entire novel & became so popular that he spawned a series of sequels. In both those cases the fictional character was far creepier than their notorious, immortal & Oscar-winning film versions.

The imaginary character of Tyler Durden, alter ego to the protagonist of Palahniuk's Fight Club, was essentially evil & destructive but has become an often-quoted ("The things we possess end up possessing us") contemporary cult anti-hero who comes to mind here. I always liked Verne's Capt. Nemo, who hated humanity ("Contact with my own species sickens me") & whose name meant No One in Latin, associated with the goddess Nemesis, personifying revenge for those guilty of hubris. I'd always thought that Capt. Ahab was his model.
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Dave Astor
01:27 PM on 01/03/2012
Interesting but not surprising that the movie versions somewhat softened the creepiness of those two characters. Hollywood is often "good" at that!

And thanks for the mentioning those two great examples of "Fight Club" and Verne's Capt. Nemo! Whenever I think of Jules Verne, I also think of another sci-fi pioneer: H.G. Wells. In Wells' "The First Men in the Moon," the Bedford character has many VERY unlikable moments -- some of them that involve the way he treats the absentminded scientist Cavor who gets the two of them to the moon.

Excellent comment, Joel!
12:13 PM on 01/03/2012
Solar by Ian McEwan has a horrible protagonist, Michael Beard. And almost every character in Woodrell's The Outlaw Album (no surprise) is a sociopath.
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01:15 PM on 01/03/2012
Thanks, Liz, for mentioning those two titles! So far, I'm McEwan and Woodrell-"challenged," but I would like to eventually read both those authors for the first time. McEwan's "Atonement" is a novel I REALLY want to get to.
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Dave Astor
08:23 AM on 01/03/2012
I thought of another category of (possibly) unlikable characters -- the ones who might be bad or might be good, but the author keeps you in suspense before you find out. For instance, in Daphne du Maurier's "My Cousin Rachel" (which I'm currently about a third of the way through), Rachel is portrayed as someone who could end up being good or bad by the time one finishes the novel.
02:47 PM on 01/02/2012
Lou Ford from the "Killer Inside of Me", Mersault from "The Stranger", Lucien Flourier from the "Childhood of a Leader," Fonchito from " In Praise of the Stepmother" should be added to the list of "unlikable characters," but more than unlikeable or unsympathetic characters, I think that their profound amorality, works as device to challenge our own morals and our social fears.
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Dave Astor
02:59 PM on 01/02/2012
I haven't read the four books you named, so I appreciate the education! (I did read "The Plague" by "The Stranger" author Albert Camus, and thought it was an amazing novel.)

"I think that their profound amorality works as device to challenge our own morals and our social fears" -- well said, and an excellent observation!

Thanks for commenting, abandofoutsiders!
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JoeyDee2
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12:23 PM on 01/02/2012
In the novel, particularly the American novel, no character quite stands out like Ahab, though he doesn't own the book completely, perhaps even less than Ishmael. I can't off the top of my head think of a character in Amer. Lit, who spouts hell and damnation like a Shakesperean tragic figure. "I'd strike the sun if it insulted me" and other outbursts are reminiscent of King Lear in the storm. In fact some of the language takes on a similar cadence. Melville knew his Shakespeare.

Footnote: in general: if you majored in English in college, you had to read Milton's Paradise Lost which is a lot more fun when Satan is on the stage.

Bad characters may be fun, but we wouldn't want them living next door.
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Dave Astor
02:21 PM on 01/02/2012
Yes, when it comes to memorable characters in American novels, Ahab is way up there. A few others in or near that stratosphere might include Huckleberry Finn, Hester Prynne, and Tom and Ma Joad, to name a few off the top of my head. (Of course, all four of those characters are likable.) And the connection you cited between Melville and Shakespeare is an apt one.

I was an English major who did read "Paradise Lost," and had trouble getting through it -- whoever was on stage! But evil characters can often be more interesting, even though, as you say, you wouldn't want them living next door -- or even within one's zip code!

Thanks, JoeyDee2!
12:02 PM on 01/02/2012
i thought the characters of The Corrections by Jonathan Franzen were all a little loopy without the charm. I couldn't get past their whining and bitterness, and despite all its good reviews and awards, I don't understand why it's supposed to be so good.
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02:07 PM on 01/02/2012
I haven't read Franzen, though I do want to give him a try -- perhaps with "Freedom." But characters who are "a little loopy without the charm" doesn't sound appealing! Thanks, invisiblewheel, for your take on "The Corrections"!
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02:23 PM on 01/02/2012
Oops -- "doesn't" should be "don't"!
02:58 PM on 01/02/2012
Hi Dave, As someone who read Franzen's novels in the following order: The Corrections (his 3rd), Freedom (his fourth), The 27th City (his first), and Strong Motion (his second), I would just add, for what it's worth (not much, I know), that The 27th City is the one that all the shouting was about. And unlike Freedom, it's also completely politically incorrect, it's topical (being about urban terrorism), it's great fun and it reads like a really well-written thriller. Strong Motion is good, too!
12:13 PM on 01/03/2012
I completely agree about The Corrections' characters. Were any of them good people? I didn't think so. And they just got worse and worse as the book progressed.
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06:50 AM on 01/02/2012
Very interesting read. You have several examples of unlikable main characters in russian litterature. Dostoievsky novels are full of them, let it be in The Brothers Karamazov, Crime and Punsihment, Demons... maybe only on The Idiot is the main character a person with some niceness.
Puskin's books are also full of gruesome portraits, and you could say that even Tolstoi's Anna Karenina is a bit of a vilain.
In French litterature you can find some ambivalent characters. In Les Miserables, Jean Valjean starts as a criminal and then spends the rest of his life redeeming himself , while in Le comte de Monte Cristo, Edmond Dantes is at first a truly innocent and sweet boy, before turning into a revenge-thirsty, yet still very human man.
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08:32 AM on 01/02/2012
Thanks, HermaO! Excellent observation about Russian literature! I read authors such as Dostoyevsky and Tolstoy long enough ago that just how villainous or not villainous some of the lead characters were was a bit fuzzy in my mind.

You're absolutely right about the transformation of Dantes in "The Count of Monte Cristo." He became quite a scary guy! But given what had happened to him (an innocent man thrown into an awful prison for years and at the same time torn away from the woman he loved), the single-minded vengeance he later waged so cleverly and ruthlessly was totally understandable. And amid all that, Dantes still showed some compassion and mercy at times. "The Count" is definitely one of the most intense, gripping novels ever written.
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12:52 PM on 01/01/2012
How about Wuthering Heights? Over on Goodreads there are several people who complain that they can't like a single person in it, including the narrators, for which reason they write it off as a "bad" book. Which is kind of silly, in my opinion, but understandable, I suppose, considering that they go in expecting to find a boilerplate "romance" about people "redeemed by their love," as one of them put it. Honestly - the things English teachers are telling their students these days! (I think one of them said she was told that by her English teacher.)
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02:00 PM on 01/01/2012
As you discovered after submitting this excellent comment, ESerafina42, "Wuthering Heights" was mentioned several times by early visitors to this post. (Their comments, and another ESerafina42 comment about Emily Bronte's classic, are well worth reading!) It's wonderful to read novels in which people are "redeemed by their love," but novels can also be great without that wish fulfillment!
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11:04 AM on 01/03/2012
One of my biggest peeves when it comes to literature is when people dismiss a book as being "bad" just because they don't like a character or find them "unlikable." Just because you can't personally connect with every single person in a book doesn't automatically mean the writing is dismissable or deficient in some way. It drives me crazy!
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01:08 PM on 01/03/2012
Me, too - I was so irked by that "review," but everyone except one or two people who commented on it were agreeing with it.
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01:10 PM on 01/03/2012
Good point! If anything, it can be an even greater achievement for an author to write a must-read novel starring an unlikable rather than likable character. That's because the unlikable character has to be drawn very compellingly to retain those readers who might want to put the book down because of the negativity!
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ok3apples
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02:05 AM on 01/01/2012
I'm surprised that Lolita has not been mentioned. There was not one likable character in that book and it was compelling from page one to the end.
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09:45 AM on 01/01/2012
That's a great addition. Thank you, ok3apples! I read "Lolita" so many years ago that it wasn't on the top of my mind. Nabokov did write a compelling book, and his Humbert Humbert character is basically a despicable guy sleeping with an underage girl.
07:56 PM on 12/31/2011
"Perfume" by Patrick Suskind. I read that a long time ago, but I do remember it was engrossing, but hard to get through because the main character, the murderer was so creepy and despicable.
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09:22 PM on 12/31/2011
I haven't read "Perfume," but it sounds like an excellent example of a book with a very unsympathetic lead character. Thanks, Caryn! Your comment made me think about whether readers have somewhat stronger memories of novels with unlikable protagonists than they do of novels with likable protagonists. It's possible, though most of my favorite novels have very likable or somewhat likable stars. That said, I do love some books with unsympathetic lead characters!
04:49 PM on 12/30/2011
The method Rowling uses to create characters on the fly can be found where she got it from originally Go to the "Travels with Li Po" website. And really, you newspaper boys should drag yourself out of the quicksands of gullibility that you wallow in and will finally sink in, to make some small effort, as a nod to your profession, to find out the TRUTH about Potter and where he actually comes from!