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The Paleo Diet: Can We Really Eat Like Our Ancestors Did?

Posted: 07/06/2011 12:37 am

Fundamentally, I am a proponent of the Paleolithic diet. However, much depends on the specifics of the Paleo diet in question. The designation seems to be somewhat open to interpretation -- and thus the dietary devilry may reside in the details.

That, in essence, is the punch line for this piece -- and I provide it right away as a bow to a recent correspondent who reminded me that busy readers want the take away, right away. I do, however, hope you hang in there for the rest. Assuming so, let's start this tale at the beginning.

In June of this year, U.S. News & World Report published a ranking of diets for weight loss and health promotion. They circulated the contestants to a panel of 22 judges, all with relevant expertise, who scored each diet in multiple categories. Scores were tallied and winners declared. The overall winner for weight loss was Weight Watchers. The Paleo diet fared rather badly.

Shortly after the rankings were published, I was contacted by ABC News and asked to comment on why the Paleo diet had been scored so poorly and what I thought about it. My first comment was that I was one of the 22 judges, and that I had not scored the Paleo diet poorly. I went on to say that I considered a true "Paleo diet" -- with an emphasis on eating foods direct from nature and more plants than animals -- a good idea. I also noted that the name could mask a host of ills, such as a diet of hamburgers, hot dogs and bacon.

Apparently, the gist of my comments as quoted by ABC News suggested I was a general critic of the Paleo diet, and also conveyed my impression that our ancestors actually ate more plants than animals.

This resulted in correspondence from Loren Cordain, a Professor in the Department of Health and Exercise Science at Colorado State University, who has published extensively on our Stone Age diet and its implications. Prof. Cordain's note was very civil, but nonetheless a chastisement of my excessive emphasis on gathering over hunting, with a cc to a veritable who's who in paleoanthropology.

I explained to Prof. Cordain, and the others listening in, that I am a proponent of our true ancestral diet, while dubious about its many modern variants. The notion -- expressed in much of Prof. Cordain's own work -- that our ancestors ate a lot of meat, has invited modern carnivores to run up their "Paleo diet" banner and claim to be eating under it.

But they are not, because modern meat is not Stone Age meat. There were no wild corned beef, salamis or pastramis in the Stone Age, so processed meat is certainly off the Paleo diet menu. There were no grain-fed cattle; no pigs fed slop; and no domesticated feed animals raised without demands on their muscles, either.

The flesh of animals our ancestors ate was generally quite lean, often with fat content around 10 percent of calories or lower. That fat was far more unsaturated than the fat in most modern meats as well and even provided some omega-3.

Prof. Cordain noted that the flesh of grass-fed cattle approximates the Paleo experience, albeit imperfectly. Game does so even better. I concur -- but how much of this is there in the modern food supply? In my experience, many people who use the Paleo diet as justification for carnivorous preferences simply eat more of the kind of meat they tend to find. And generally, they are not finding antelope.

The issue of animal vs. plant foods remained, however, and I was fully prepared to simply respond with "mea culpa" (I know when I'm out of my weight class!), when Dr. S. Boyd Eaton of Emory University was gracious enough to contribute his views. While many papers examining the proportion of hunting to gathering are based on averages among modern-day hunter gatherers in diverse locales, Dr. Eaton has focused on African populations thought to most closely approximate the original human experience. Dr. Eaton's work suggests a plant:animal calorie ratio of 1:1.

Which, in essence, suggests that any apparent differences I had with Prof. Cordain were a bit about semantics (volume vs. calories), and a bit about which data to emphasize. Since plants tend to be energy-dilute and animals energy-dense, to get a 1:1 calorie ratio means a much greater than 1:1 ratio of plant food volume to animal food volume. It means quite a lot of gathering along with the hunting. Mostly plants, in other words, is not demonstrably wrong. Seemingly in the company of Dr. Eaton, I think my original assertion defensible.

Of course, the true beginning of a story about our Stone Age diet resides not with U.S. News & World Report, but in the Stone Age. The Paleolithic era, spanning our use of rough stone implements, extends some 4 million years into the past.

We may reasonably limit ourselves to the latter half of that span and focus on the emergence of our Homo erectus forebears, thought to be the first highly effective human hunters, roughly 2 million years ago. Our own species, sapiens, arose roughly 300,000 years ago and our particular subspecies, sapiens sapiens, roughly 30,000 years ago. Agriculture was not part of the human experience until roughly 12,000 years ago -- and once it was, nothing was ever the same. But that's a story for another time.

The Stone Age thus provided several thousand millennia to shape the adaptations of our genus, and several hundred to shape those of our species. We carry the genes of the well-adapted, because ancestors not well-suited to survive, reach adulthood and make babies ... make very poor ancestors. Like all modern creatures, we are the posterity of pre-modern creatures who "had the stuff," and paid it forward.

Among the stuff that mattered was the capacity to extract all necessary fuel from available foods. This is very easy to understand at the extremes: a person who required for their survival a nutrient not found on this planet, would not survive on this planet. A person who could not tolerate a nutrient essential for survival, such as water, similarly would not survive. While this is so obvious as to be trivial, it conceals a subtlety: food came first, physiology came after. There were plants before there were creatures that could survive by eating plants. There was water before there were creatures that needed to drink water.

And the same extends to every detail of dietary intake. We are adapted to survive on protein, carbohydrate and fat because those are the three kinds of macronutrients this planet provides. We "need" iron and calcium and essential amino acids and potassium and vitamin C -- because the food supply available to us on this planet provides them. If it did not, we could not possibly need them and be here to talk about it. Other creatures that needed what the planet did provide would be here in our place.

It just stands to reason that the diet that shaped our physiology in the first place would tell us something about the diet for which that physiology is best suited now. If you find that hard to swallow, consider how we decide what to feed animals in a zoo. To my knowledge, no clinical trials are involved in which the lions are tried on a diet of hay and the koalas on a diet of mackerel. Instead, the animals are all given food approximating what they were eating in the wild -- their native diet. If this is relevant to every creature on the planet, how likely is it that it would be irrelevant to us?

This, then, is the basic argument for the "Paleo diet." But there is more to consider. Throughout much of the Stone Age, mean human life expectancy was all of about 20 years and the life span extended only to about 40. While it makes sense that our native diet is apt to be good for us, we cannot conclude that a diet best suited to a two- to four-decade life is just as good for an eight-decade life.

Our Stone Age ancestors had a high caloric throughput, meaning lots of calories both out and in every day, due to the high energy demands of Stone Age survival. Perhaps consuming 4,000 or so calories a day -- and burning them all -- should be required before the "Paleo diet" label truly pertains.

Dr. Eaton among others suggests that our Paleolithic ancestors consumed as much as 100 grams of fiber daily, from a variety of plant foods eaten in large enough quantities to fuel that high energy demand. If 100 grams of fiber a day were required to defend a Paleo diet claim, there would be very few signed up.

In reality, virtually no one today practices anything close to a true Stone Age diet and no one at all practices such a diet perfectly. When was the last time you saw a mammoth?

When the Paleo diet label is used to justify a diet of sausages and bacon cheeseburgers, the concept has wandered well off the reservation. When used as guidance away from processed foods and toward a diet based on a variety of plants, nuts, seeds, eggs, fish and lean meats (preferably wild game), it is eminently reasonable, and no doubt a vast improvement, over the typical American diet. Stone Agers did a lot more running than we do and most certainly did not run on Dunkin'!

We don't know that even a well-practiced Paleo diet is the "best" choice for health, as compared to a Mediterranean diet, a traditional Asian diet, a mostly-plant diet, or a well-balanced vegan diet. We do know that a population of some 7 billion people cannot eat as much meat as a population in the millions did, without doing the irreparable harm to the planet that is already far advanced.

That our native diet is relevant to our health seems little less than self-evident. That we can't get back to the Stone Age from here is equally so. Exactly how we apply lessons from the past to our current dietary practices will decide whether effects on our future health, and that of our planet, are as hoped- or otherwise. So the details matter; let's chew on them carefully.

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Dr. David L. Katz; www.davidkatzmd.com
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01:26 PM on 07/31/2011
In complete agreement with this. Paleo has many good points that are supported by the physical biology of te human body - natural foods are always 100% better than processed food-like products. Still, I've known Paleo followers that seem to take it too far and eat fried meat every day. I tried Paleo for a few days but returned to a more plant-heavy diet quickly based on how my body felt. Listen to the wisdom of your body - it tells you what it needs. Thank you for this interesting, balanced article.
06:23 PM on 07/12/2011
I find it absurd to even imagine that eating even a healthy paleolithic animal would yield only 10% of calories as fat. Since fat is twice as calorically dense as protein, that would imply that edible animal flesh was only 5% fat by mass, and that's AFTER discarding scraps and bones. So, if you were to put this animal back together, you're assuming this paleolithic bovine or deer had, what, 3% bodyfat!? Even in a healthy animal, after you discard the scraps, the edible parts would probably be at least 20% to 40% fat by weight, and thus probably 40% to 80% of calories. If animal flesh was 50% of calories (give or take) for hunter-gatherers, you're looking at proportions of animal fat, still predominantly saturated, astronomically higher than what is recommended to Americans today. This idea that wild animals are skinny or were skinny in the paleolithic era is an absurd fantasy. And that's before you even consider that the fattiest portions of the animal were eaten first.
04:23 AM on 07/14/2011
It may be that animals on farms today are fatter than those of paleolithic times. Animals in the wild had to find food in order to survive, and were likely more active as a result, whereas animals on farms are likely more prone to be sedentary and are likely fattened up by farmer's large supply of food.

As far as recommended daily consumption of fats go, there is evidence that the whole scare over saturated fat has been completely blown out of proportion. To nearly eliminate or greatly reduce saturated fat like many americans are doing today is likely very bad for long term health
03:20 PM on 07/14/2011
I don't doubt that farm animals today are much fatter. But a bison with 3% body fat is rather far-fetched, ha. We also discard the fattiest portions of animals today rather than eat them preferentially, and our consumption of meat was much higher then than today (since there weren't grains to load us up with empty calories), so I can't imagine that anyone who survived for very long got only 10% of calories from saturated fat.

Get rid of the grains, refined sugars, and industrial oils, and you can probably vary pretty widely between different levels of vegetable and meat intake without serious health consequences.
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10:37 AM on 07/11/2011
I've just started a 60-day Paleo challenge (organized through my CrossFit gym) and while I get the science and concepts behind it (Robb Wolf's book was easy to follow and I had a cheat sheet, my dad's an anthropologist who gave me quite literally dissertations about this), it can be incredibly challenging finding the appropriate foods, particularly grass-fed beef. And I live in a very large metro area surrounded by rural communities and filled with both permanent and weekend farmers markets, so you'd think it would be easy to it. Still, so far the food options have been a breeze - having more of an issue missing my afternoon Diet Coke. I'm committed to following through as strictly as possible for the 60 days and then evaluating it.
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FaunaAndFlora
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10:50 PM on 07/11/2011
This is a good site for finding local sources of meat, eggs and dairy from pastured animals.

http://www.eatwild.com/
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11:15 AM on 07/12/2011
Thanks Fauna. Apparently one resources sells at my local Publix! One of the guys at my gym bought a freezer and I think a few of us are going in on a half cow purchase. I really do like the idea of grass fed/local beef. Sometimes the whole farmers market thing (i.e. the weekend ones) just are so yuppie and overpriced, it's really irritating.
09:22 PM on 07/24/2011
sbmulqueen: So far how is it going? I trialed the Paleo diet starting in Oct of 2010. I ran with it until February of 2011. I lost just over 40 lbs, noticed that my energy levels went way up, that I slept much better and longer too, and that my annual flu in January never occurred. I had patterned it around the writings in Robb Wolf's book. Since then, I decided to stay on it. I like meats, fish, tons of fresh vegetables, water and seasonal fruits. I just begun searching for and finding grass fed meats to buy. I have very little taste for salt, don't drink but a drink every month or so and have seen my levels of stress go way down. My body mass index points me to a fighting weight of 205 so with that I figure that I will probably lose 20 more pounds over time, naturally without even trying. I am more active too than I had been and starting to look forward to working out.
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09:54 AM on 07/10/2011
David Katz says you can be perfectly healthy on a diet of mostly--"or even ALL"--plants. That should drain the credibility from anything he writes.
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02:23 PM on 07/08/2011
I'll try this one again:

"Throughout much of the Stone Age, mean human life expectancy was all of about 20 years and the life span extended only to about 40. ...we cannot conclude that a diet best suited to a two- to four-decade life is just as good for an eight-decade life."

This somehow implies that the diet is inadequate for someone who wants to live longer than 40 years. The reason we died earlier back then has more to do with accident and infectious diseases (no medicine, vaccines, antibiotics etc). The evidence we have suggests that people weren't dying from heart disease and cancer, and diabetes, obesity and Alzheimers probably didn't exist (at least, at no where near the rates we have today).

Looking to the upper Paleolithic (30k ya - 10k ya) the life expectancy at birth was around 33. Evidence suggests that 50% of the population died before the age of 5, hence the low AVERAGE. But lets not confuse average with "how long they lived." There is evidence of people living well into their 60's and 70's.
12:27 PM on 07/08/2011
And this doesn't even mention the fact the unless you are eating everything Non-GMO and organic, even the water you drink, that what you are taking in...we are as human hundreds of years behind the genetic change in the food. We evolved eating food that existed back 30,000years. This is not what we have today, which has been changed in the last 100 years. In order to extend lifespan, reistance to parasites, fungi, virus' and bactiera, our food has been altered. So how well do our bodies really extract nutrients from what we eat today? And how this is going to affect us as a species is yet to be determined. There are already theories that mental disorders such as autism, ADHD, OCD can be linked to the food we eat. And evidence to show that clearing the diet of overly processed, GMO foods can improve some of the conditions. Perhaps we will figure out that GMO foods are really hurting more than helping. Perhaps we'll move back to good foods, grown with out pesticides, made with out preservatives and additives, and brought to the table fresh will be the key for us. One can only hope.
09:27 PM on 07/24/2011
Mree Sheehan: I enjoyed your insights. Thanks. I've been on Paleo since Oct 2010. It's been great. I am beginning to ask myself though that if the insects out there in the fields aren't chewing through the green leafy vegetables that I am gobbling down, then why should I? Hmmm. My next stop is to learn about the pesticides that the growers are using.
09:39 AM on 07/08/2011
Paleo looks like a great way to eat if you are lactose intolerant and have celiac or gluten sensitivity. Why didn't Robb Wolf and the other Paleo diet advocates simply call it the Lactose Gluten Free Bean Phobic Diet, would have been more believable.
06:45 PM on 07/08/2011
Many people follow a pretty good paleo-ish or primal diet that still enjoy cheese, drink raw milk, and eat good whole milk yogurt.

Do you know why people do better eating paleo-ish? It's not a bunch of gluten phobic/sensitive people. People want to avoid eating too many grains(especially ones that have to be milled to death in order for humans to be able to metabolize them) because they cause unnecessary insulin spikes and have the same impact on our bodies as eating table sugar. You likely already knew this, but you sure did not show this in your post. How old are you by the way? If you are young, wait till you hit your late 30s and 40s and see how you feel about a more paleo-ish diet. To be primal or paleo, you don't have to go balls to the wall with your entire diet every single day for the rest of your life..
01:51 PM on 07/09/2011
Milk and cheese are neolithic foods. That's all well and good if people want to eat a whole foods diet and exclude processed food, but why call it paleo? Chicken eggs are neolithic foods as is eating modern cattle no matter what you feed them. Heck, many deer are plumped up on GMO corn and soybean fields prior to being taken during deer season. The whole premise of a paleo diet is a facade if you eat some neolithic food and exclude others.

I'm 48 years old and have been fit and athletic my entire life. I eat beans and wheat and have zero problems maintaining my weight or my fitness. I played div 1 college soccer on a perenial top 20 team and continue to play and regularly run 5 and 10k races and place in my age group. I did this all enjoying some wheat and beans.

People feel better on a paleo diet usually because they exclude processed foods and lose weight by combining it with an exercise program. If I had a dollar for every overweight couch potato (oops only yams or sweet potatoes) pre paleo dieter who now preaches Grok in some grassfed meat I'd be rich. That's great, but some of us have been fit and healthy our entire lives by eating right and exercising and that eating included grains and beans along with other neolithic foods.
06:45 PM on 07/08/2011
I guess you have a problem with eating grassfed beef, nuts, berries(especially blueberries, good fruits(grapefruit/apples), organic free roaming eggs(the yolks are packed with nutrition), organic bacon, tons of nutrient packed vegetables(especially kale, spinach, and broccoli), some good dairy from grassfed sources, and occasional or very limited grains(when I eat grains, it's something like ezekial bread or brown rice). If you are vegan, I guess you would have a problem with this diet. If not a vegan, there should be no problem with this diet and one should try to keep an open mind(keep an open mind even if vegan, if not you blind yourself to all the research and only pay attention to the research you want to believe is true)
12:05 AM on 07/09/2011
Morgan - You had me agreeing with almost everything you said until you mentioned bacon. I'm sorry but there just isn't any good rationale for eating such a high fat and fried food. Lean grass fed and organic meats are fine in moderation, but bacon.... not so much.
10:49 PM on 07/07/2011
You are forgetting how much physical work it would take to hunt or gather the food you're talking about. Diet is only half of the equation. Our paleo-ancestors also had to walk miles and miles each day to gather and hunt the food they ate and water they drank.
07:07 PM on 07/08/2011
That's not necessarily true. A fair bit of research on modern hunter-gatherers has suggested that they "work" (finding/hunting for food) less than four hours a day. So, *maybe* they're walking "miles and miles", and they definitely weren't sitting around on their butts watching TV or playing videogames, but not everyone in a tribe has to hunt to feed the rest of them.

Exercise is important for specific fitness-related goals, but is not nearly as important to weight loss as a good, healthy diet.
09:31 PM on 07/24/2011
RootyB: I agree with your assessment of food in relation to exercise. The way that I am stacking it in terms of priority is sleeping, eating, moving = great health and longevity.
12:31 PM on 07/13/2011
You don't have to eat as much as they did, either, obviously. Very few people need 4,000 calories per day - but that doesn't mean that eating the kinds of things they ate wouldn't be better for you.
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10:06 PM on 07/07/2011
Great article Dr. Katz. I look forward to your writings.

I love this quote.

" If 100 grams of fiber a day were required to defend a Paleo diet claim, there would be very few signed up"

Truth ! :)
09:37 PM on 07/24/2011
frank day: 100 Grams is a little less than 4 ounces. How many leafy green collard greens would that be?
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04:42 PM on 07/07/2011
"We don't know that even a well-practiced Paleo diet is the "best" choice for health, as compared to... a well-balanced vegan diet."

Yeah we do. A diet that requires supplementation from a pill, shot or fortified grain (aka supplements added to grains) in order to not die simply CANNOT be the best choice.

I'm guessing that, like my other comments that questioned the diet based on the beliefs of Veganism, this comment might not get approved, but I figured I'd try.
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03:45 PM on 07/08/2011
You DO know that you can have a vegan diet without supplements, right? You may as well make the assertion that you cannot live on a paleo diet without a cholesterol medication. B12 (which I'm assuming you're refering to) can be found naturally in fruits and vegetables that are freshly picked from the ground and unwashed.
06:28 PM on 07/08/2011
Please do a little more research. Appreciable amounts of B12 needed for human health do not exist from plant sources, the exceptions being spirulina and chlorella, which our ancestors did not really have access to in the right quantities. Also, now I am being the broken record, there is not a single plant source that provides all the amino acids human muscle and bone need to maintain proper health. Again, the one except I believe is soy, which needs to be fermented in order to properly assimilate it's protein.

Cholesterol medication? Come on. Again, please do your research before commenting on things like this. First of all, we need dietary cholesterol, like from eggs, if we don't get enough, our livers might start producing too much of it, raising our bodies' cholesterol levels. Secondly, saturated fat, if simply existing in good food sources and eating more for survival rather than overeating, is not going to do anything bad for anyone's cholesterol profile, if anything, it would help.

Stay informed and educated! Weston A. Price Foundation is a good place to go. You need to look at people who present peer reviewed double-blind research and are completely unbiased, free of any heavily influential ideology. The only bias that is o.k. is the bias towards wanting optimal nutrition.
07:10 PM on 07/08/2011
Oh yeah? You should call the UK Vegan Society and let them know.
http://www.vegansociety.com/lifestyle/nutrition/b12.aspx
02:42 PM on 07/07/2011
I respect your devotion to research and finding answers David, what I do not respect is your choice to not respond to any posts here and defend and/or explain your positon.
02:41 PM on 07/07/2011
I find it curious that David chooses not to respond to the comments here. I also find it a bit cowardly.
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01:37 PM on 07/07/2011
...it basically sounds like you're brain is in the correct place Dr. Katz...

...but you're "heart" (emotional center) wants to keep telling you that the vegetarian myth is real.
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10:04 PM on 07/07/2011
LOL
10:20 AM on 07/07/2011
As for the paleo diet, it may be a good diet, but the scientific rationale is wanting, IMO.

a) studies of modern hunter-gatherers have found a range of diets in terms of macronutrients. Some groups get nearly all their calories from carbs and others very few, like Inuits. Humans are very adaptable.

b) the argument humans evolved to match a type of diet would mean that sub-populations within distinct areas have had different selective pressures and would evolve differently depending on available food supplies. The diet right for you today would depend on where your paleolithic ancestors lived.

c) Paleolithic man didn't live long due to disease and injury, natural selection would not favor a healthy long-term diet past 30 or 40 years of age. We would have evolved for optimum performance for a diet in our younger years with little regard for long-term health. There would be no evolutionary advantage to a diet that prevents heart disease in paleoman.

d) Evolution based on selection can happen very fast. DNA evidence has shown that the prevalence of the gene for lactose tolerance arose in European populations very quickly after cow domestication. If that's so, then there is nothing to say that paleolithic human diets are better for modern humans. We may have evolved away from our ancestoral paleolithic diet generations ago.
02:34 PM on 07/07/2011
Point c is an argument against point d. When get beyond the youthful virulent ages, our bodies begin to change quite drastically. This begins the rest of our lives that you said yourself likely do not benefit much form evolutionary adaptations. What we have to focus on are the facts about what aging does to our bodies. And the fact is, eating less carb heavy foods, and more dense foods packed with essential nutrients, favors anyone that is past the age of 35 or 40.
06:59 PM on 07/07/2011
No point c does not argue against point d.

Here's how. Point d goes directly to the passing of genes. Those that are lactose tolerant are more likely to grow to adulthood and reproduce. That's natural selection at work. The rise of the genetic adaptation points to how quickly evolution can work. If, however, few people live past 30 or 40 and in the case of women, fertility goes down, then there is few if little natural selection to direct evolution.

Hey, I'm not saying the paleo diet is a bad diet per se. I'm saying the evolutionary based rationale for it, however, is flawed.
01:32 AM on 07/08/2011
point a- you are correct, and if you were to actually do some research on the paleo diet, you'd know that it is macronutrient agnostic. For instance, you could be an athlete and eating more starchy things like yams and sweet potatoes, especially post workout. While there is a broad range of things that our ancestors did eat, we do know that they WEREN'T eating grains, legumes, processed foods and sure as heck weren't eating HFCS.
point c- is just ignorant. diseases like heart disease, diabetes, and the other 'diseases of civilisation' are not evident in native populations UNTIL flour and sugar are introduced into their diets. I'm afraid that facts trump your guess. It makes the incorrect assumption that heart disease is somehow a natural thing in our species, it is not, it is caused by our modern food. Without the modern food, there is nothing to 'prevent'.
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"Fundamentally, I am a proponent of the Paleolithic diet. However, much depends on the specifics of the Paleo diet in question. The designation seems to be somewhat open to interpretation -- and thus the dietary devilry may reside in the details."

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The above is one of the most convulsed lead paragraphs I've ever seen. It causes the layman reader to think, "Oh, I'm dealing with a paranoid."

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You see? He's announcing he's a weak writer. He's wasting our precious time. Get on with it, man!

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"Shortly after the rankings were published, I was contacted by ABC News and asked to comment on why the Paleo diet had been scored so poorly and what I thought about it. My first comment was that I was one of the 22 judges, and that I had not scored the Paleo diet poorly."
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10:41 AM on 07/08/2011
Actually the first paragraph is correct. There are many different interpretations of the paleo diet out there. Some advocate no milk, some say grains are okay while other banish all grains, some are okay with unlimited fruits while others allow a few. All allow leafy green vegetables. Some promote almost any meat while others are very strict about the meat being grass-raised and wild.