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Writing Like a White Guy

Posted: 11/18/11 10:04 AM ET

From the Poetry Foundation

My father says I should use a pseudonym. "They won't publish you if they see your name. They'll know you're not one of them. They'll know you're one of us." This has never occurred to me, at least not in a serious way. "No publisher in America's going to reject my poems because I have a foreign name," I reply. "Not in 2002." I argue, "These are educated people. My name won't be any impediment." Yet in spite of my faith in the egalitarian attitude of editors and the anonymity of book contests, I understand my father's angle on the issue.

With his beard shaved and his hair shorn, his turban undone and left behind in Bolina Doaba, Punjab--the town whose name we take as our own--he lands at Heathrow in 1965, a brown boy of 18 become a Londoner. His circumstance then must seem at once exhilarating and also like drifting in a lifeboat: necessary, interminable. I imagine the English of the era sporting an especially muted and disdainful brand of racism toward my alien father, his brother and sister-in-law, toward his brother-in-law and sister, his nieces and nephews, and the other Indians they befriend on Nadine Street, Charlton, just east of Greenwich. The sense of exclusion arrives over every channel, dull and constant.

At least one realtor, a couple of bankers, and a few foremen must have a different attitude. One white supervisor at the industrial bakery my father labors in invites him home for dinner. The Brit wants to offer an introduction to his single daughters. He knows my father's a hard worker, a trait so commonly attributed to the immigrant it seems sometimes a nationality unto itself, and maybe the quietude of the nonnative speaker appeals to the man's sense of civility.

As a result he finds my father humble, upstanding, his complexion a light beach sand indicative of a vigor exceeding that of the pale English suitors who come calling. In my imagination, my father's embarrassed and placid demeanor, his awkward formality in that setting, is charming to the bashful, giggly daughters, and this impresses the supervisor even further. But nothing much comes of that evening. My father never visits again. He marries my mother, another Sikh Punjabi also, a few years later, but that event is evidence that one Englishman considered my father the man, not my father the "paki."

 
From the Poetry Foundation My father says I should use a pseudonym. "They won't publish you if they see your name. They'll know you're not one of them. They'll know you're one of us." This has never ...
From the Poetry Foundation My father says I should use a pseudonym. "They won't publish you if they see your name. They'll know you're not one of them. They'll know you're one of us." This has never ...
 
 
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ms.understood
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03:55 PM on 11/27/2011
why is this on blackvoices? every minority doesn't qualify to be heard on through black mediums just because they are what we like to call a 'minority.' why don't we just give all black mediums to others who use it to come up and then disown the community that made them in the first place?!
01:48 AM on 11/23/2011
"We call the process ... "assimilation." ... implies that the process is one of becoming absorbed or incorporated ... that relies first on the negation of one identity in order to adopt another ... a destructive rather than constructive process."

This is a partial reading. Assimilating means getting along, not destroying one's identity. Rather, it means to broaden it. Those who see other cultures and traditions as a threat wall themselves into ghettos, rich or poor. People don't care who eats pork; they care if you won't touch a single dish at the barbecue, will openly turn up your nose at everything offered, or will refuse even to come.

Those who are not prepared to mix with others will always find others threatening or demeaning. The truth is, it is natural to want to hang onto our habits, outlooks, and traditions. But when joining new groups of people, much less new societies, one must not just have pride in where one comes from but allow others the same sort of pride in where they come from. You can't join anything by rejecting the new. Yet so many reject the very societies and people they choose to join.

Much of this is about how intimidating basic socialization is , especially with those unlike oneself in obvious ways. To couch it in terms of prejudice is perversely soothing because it takes away one's own responsibilities and negates every missed opportunity, affirms every worst and saddest fear.
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11:59 PM on 11/24/2011
this is a partial reading

it takes an excellent snapshot of our social experiment in America.


and what of the self or identity is not the condition or conditioning of the environment one is found in? and of that what is material for synthesis?
04:44 PM on 11/25/2011
The environment helps shape us, but is not everything about us. Frankly, life throws all of us in some measure or another to the wolves, by my estimate. It throws us in with strange and different people whether we're ready for it or not and whether or not they're ready for us, from the time we're quite young and to at least some extent for the rest of our lives.

There will always be some unreasonable expectation or even outright prejudice. But while some stresses are inescapable, some are opportunities. Two people can't shake hands without both putting a hand forward. A common and natural reaction to difference and new stimuli is fear and withdrawal, even resentment. However, the stress of socialization comes not only from where we are, but who we are. We can do our part to reach out, too, and to see and value the hand that is extended toward us. It is easy to paint oneself in a corner socially and then say it happened through everyone's fault but one's own.

Two people both want to shake hands, to meet in the middle somewhere. Because we are all human, there will always be ways we can share with and appreciate each other. But there will always be the temptation to say it cannot or must not be done, that the other is unworthy, and that we are sufficient unto ourselves.
04:51 PM on 11/22/2011
I really enjoyed this piece. As a (brace yourself) black, gay, female // born to poor intellectual immigrant (Jamaican) parents // with an Ethiopian first name // and Scottish last name // who grew up and was educated in a predominantly white neighborhood/school system (whew!) I can relate tremendously to your life experiences.

The only difference is my parents would never tell me to "write like a straight white girl" (no shade to your dad, i love him :). I was born to a more revolutionary set of individuals. I also attended an HBCU which further strengthened my confidence to be myself and be true to my values as a black woman in America.

Most importantly though, I read this book "The Psychotechnology of Brainwashing". This book changed my life instantly and i've excelled in almost everything I put forth effort into afterwards. Graduated Magna Cum Laude and I currently have a 4.0 GPA 1/2 way through my Masters program.

And although assimilation is inevitable, I still identify with my 'blackness' regardless of how its viewed and skewed by the dominant culture.

Not even sure if what I said made any sense or is relative at all, but I wanted to share lol. Thanks.
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03:59 PM on 11/27/2011
love the way your brain works. you, and i, show everyone that assimilation doesn't have to mean disownership of your identity, no matter how successful said one is or becomes. but not everyone is capable, and to those who aren't, i lay down the welcome mat while you exit left.
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nix28
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11:46 PM on 11/21/2011
This is wonderfully written and enthralling! I could not stop reading! While reading, I kept thinking to myself how odd it felt to see American culture, specifically in a linguistic context, so accurately analyzed and dissected. I enjoyed reading the implications of deviating from one's culture in order to gain acceptance into mainstream society; the quest to remove the neon "other" sign from one's forehead in order to disappear or reinvent oneself into a member of the majority. I have to admit that I felt a bit of validation in reading an article in which the author's experiences and thoughts so closely reflected my own. Somebody else understands!

No need to drag out my own story, but suffice it to say, I've had these same experiences. With my White friends, I was accepted to the extent that I ceased to be Black in their eyes. From my Black peers, I was seen as wanting to be White and therefore rejected. Quite the predicament. In my little part of the world, I'm seeing more and more integration instead of assimilation, which I think is amazing, and I hold out hope that the generations after me will be able to benefit from and continue this forward movement.
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06:46 PM on 11/20/2011
Your opening paragraph reeled me in, because I've had the same thought about my name and submitting writing to literary agents - and I live in Australia, but still, most popular writers are those who are either extremely controversial or 'Anglo' in the sense that they have traditional Anglo surnames like Smith, Howard, basically everything that is easy to read, at the most, having no more than two syllables.
In regard to the US: I don't think "race" will cease to be an issue for as long as countries like the United States use the term 'race'. Race is the type of word that is a relic from the racialist point of view, which was proven to be invalid. All humans have the same DNA, so there is no such thing as race. At least not on the way that it is used in the US to distinguish cultural difference and that's the problem; a word like ethnicity should be used, not race.
Every time I read the word 'race', especially when it is used in my (published in the US) psychology text books, I really can't separate it from racialism (which is inherently racist).
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papapj
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11:45 AM on 11/21/2011
Well said, Ana...Even those who profess no ethnic bias and use the word 'race' unwittingly submit to a racist meme. Trouble is, it's dyed-in-in-the-wool here in the States; they even acknowledge it with a census that differentiates people thus.

It's all coming to a head now, as the election of an ethnically Black President forebodes the rapidly diminishing majority of European American and the death throes of the White privilege (s)he enjoyed for generations - indeed, since the inception of this nation.

The transition will be as painful and as long as the denial that accompanies White privilege survives...
09:04 PM on 11/21/2011
Which is my point below, about the name of this forum. Forcing race into the picture, and then saying it shouldn't be in the picture just dont add up to me.
Satirist1
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09:58 AM on 11/20/2011
What irony.
I would've paid serious money to adopt your name during my struggle to obtain tenure-track university job! Seriously.
01:54 AM on 11/20/2011
I can't imagine why race would still be an issue. We have forums called "Black Voice"
to soothe all the racial tensions.

Amazingly ironic and hypocritical.

I can safely speak for myself and my friends when i say, we would never acknowledge, read, or contribute to any forum called "White Voice".

Absolutely thoughtless and the epitome of bad judgment.
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papapj
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11:50 AM on 11/21/2011
The "White Voice" is the default voice of America. Indeed, the default American is viewed, in the eyes of many, to be a European American. The absence of the viewpoint of other Americans necessitates such fora.

You are oblivious to such things because, as part of the dominant culture, your needs are served by what appears in the mainstream.

Demographically, the mainstream is rapidly changing, which brings you to utter such inanities as "I can't imagine why race would still be an issue." quite simply because you have lived the sheltered life of one who has enjoyed the benefits of White privilege...Enjoy it while you can, your days as a minority - like everybody else - are approaching....
12:14 PM on 11/21/2011
Yeah...And when all the whites are gone, the USA will look like Detroit!!!
08:52 PM on 11/21/2011
I, also, feel no need to issue threats to anyone of any color. It is obvious by your tone that you welcome your days of dominance, when all I welcome is a blended society, with no undertones whatsoever.
In spite of your racial bias, you are very well-spoken, so I commend you for that.
The "sheltered" life I've lived may not be quite what you think it is. But that is another story for another day.
You obviously are not concerned with subverting racial feelings, but rather advancing your own cause, which, i gather from your response, is vengeance and vindication.
I believe you helped me make my own point. There is no way to drop the race issue, when there are forums called "Black Voices". It does provide people such as yourself with a vehicle to further your own remedy for your own perceived bruised feelings. I don't dislike black people just for being black, and I don't intend to ever hold any hatred towards anybody of any race.
Maybe we can change this forum to "American Voices". Then we can all unite, standing side by side, in an effort to make this country stronger.
Now that would be a constructive idea.
12:13 PM on 11/23/2011
There is a need for programming related to varying ethnic groups because there are pertinent issues and perspectives that are rarely covered in "main stream" media, that are of paramount importance in the black community. Should we just ignore and not address these issues, celebrate our successes that don't make the front pages of AOL, or MSN? Why is it when people of color celebrate our culture, it is construed as hypocritical? Read the stories and ask why you never see these issues in other forums rather than denigrate the forum and its relevance.
12:33 AM on 11/24/2011
This wouldn't seem quite so benign to you if the forum were called "White Voices".

Anybody would be villified for even trying to create a forum with that name. It's amazing to me that I'm actually trying to help suppress racism against blacks with my posts, and I keep getting thrown to the wolves.

If you want to incite racial emotions with "Black Voices", "Black Entertainment Television", etc. why should you let someone like me get in the way. I'm just the one trying to point out to you how all of it is perceived. If the cause is to create unity to help the black man achieve dominance over the white man, then it is probably doing it's job.

If the cause is to help lower racism, this forum is doing damage to your cause.

Only you can choose which battle you're fighting for.
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french queen13
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11:00 PM on 11/19/2011
Thank you for this very interesting essay, Mr Bolina. I've just come back from visiting the US. I would imagine there are similarities with Australia; race is an issue here, but not, perhaps, as overtly as for Americans, given the mesh of race and slavery in your history.

I think you're right that people are probably kidding themselves if they think they are oblivioius to race. I know I'm not, and that's in a way of trying to be aware of other people's sensibilties, at least.

Thinking of the "you're so Americanised" comment by that lady, I think the first thought that would have come to me would be someone's accent. American accent means American person, whatever race; it's the same with the generations of Australian kids who are of various Asian backgrounds. The accent says "Aussie" wherever they might have been born; one wouldn't be so silly as to assume that non-white means foreign.
09:07 PM on 11/19/2011
I learned a long time ago that the only non-white authors who get published are ones who write about race or racial identity.

I am an aspiring nwriter, and one of the trends I noticed in my 4 out of 6 rejection letters from agencies is "due to the nature of the industry." In other words, they fear a story with black characters won't sell.
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npw350
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05:00 PM on 11/20/2011
Keep pushing it out there. Not every publishing house knows how to market every piece. Don't worry about your black characters. If it's good writing you'll eventually win. Good luck.
06:22 PM on 11/20/2011
How on earth do you know what they're referring to when they talk about "the nature of the industry"? From those few words, they could just as easily be trying to tell you that you're a bad writer. And if you've only received 6 rejection letters, you're not trying hard enough. I know of people that get scores of rejections before they get accepted.
11:32 AM on 11/24/2011
They can't tell me my writing is bad when they've never read my work. I am talking about synopsis, dear. 2/3 of what the industry publishes each year is crap, so save it.
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Rich Cash
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06:54 PM on 11/19/2011
In a few generations, race will cease to be an issue. My maternal grandfather was full-blood Cherokee. My paternal grandmother was a German Jew, my other grandparents a mix of Scots-Irish, English, and Welsh. My wife is Filipino. One of her great grandfathers was Spanish, one grandfather was Irish, the other Chinese. My kids can throw a dart at a world map and stand a better than 50% chance of hitting a recent ancestral homeland.
06:23 PM on 11/20/2011
"In a few generations, race will cease to be an issue." Hilarious. I think I remember them saying this after the end of the Civil War, and then during the Civil Rights movement. And we see how well that turned out.
12:58 PM on 11/19/2011
"The only one"- the story of my life. Although it was difficult at times, humour proved to be my "hammer." I appreciate your candor in this post and look forward to reading your work.
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AntonioSaucedo
12:12 PM on 11/19/2011
Yes, I guess you should write about race but as a hopelessly unscientific and socially harmful concept that's on its way out. Studies on the human genome --haplogroups, Y-DNA, mtDNA-- pretty much will eventually accomplish that on the genetic front. Race-based identities --blackness, whiteness, otherness, etcness- will follow suit.
06:25 PM on 11/20/2011
People have been writing about "race-based identities" for at least three generations. Where have you been?
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AntonioSaucedo
11:52 PM on 11/20/2011
I know where you've been: not reading my comment. I say that category of identity is on its way out. Or at least its validity will be serously called into question
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SuperMex
07:03 PM on 11/18/2011
Welcome to the Brown club.
05:17 PM on 11/18/2011
Love the essay. As an African American writer I have had the same thoughts. The only difference is my parents, they really strived for me to maintain my African American identity. Sometimes when I write I linger on if this character should be black or white and if I choose white how it will make my parents feel. In this way writing is impossible. It is not until recently that I gave myself the freedom to not care. That being said it probably isn't a coincidence that I no longer live in the USA. In Europe my nationalitl has become the issue and this is new to me, liberating. I never realized how much stress race was on me. I can be me now.
03:31 PM on 11/18/2011
This is a wonderful article! Very truthful and moving. This is my first comment to HuffingtonPost and I was moved to post how appreciative I am regarding your article. You can't get to "post" racial until you acknowldege how race truly affects you (good or bad) in this country.