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A Huge, Huge, Mistake Obama Made in His Wonderful, Wonderful Speech


Barack Obama brought us a wonderful speech. Obama's speech produced "a bump" that polls alone couldn't possibly measure. I got choked up and a jump in my diaphragm that is, for me, a completely unfamiliar physical response to any event - except the speeches of Martin Luther King Jr. and Robert F. Kennedy.

But, I am mystified why Obama would use in his speech two lines reminiscent of Aaron Sorkin's dialogue in "The American President," which as of this moment, MSNBC, the most supportive network for Obama, has already pointed out. If the Republicans aren't completely asleep at the wheel, Obama has given them a huge opening. They will explain the "lift" and then their line will be, "we were wrong. Barack Obama is not a celebrity, he's an actor - pretending to be a leader." And, it plays right into the Hillary zinger, "a speech." And they'll say, "he's only a speech, and it's not even his!" Why, in a speech full of soaring oratory would those lines be included? Why was it remotely necessary? Wasn't there another way to say what was said? Surely there was.

The lines were, "Bob's problem isn't that he doesn't get it. Bob's problem is that he can't sell it" and Obama, "it's not because John McCain doesn't care. It's because John McCain doesn't get it." The other: "you want a character debate? Fine..." and Obama, ""If John McCain wants to have a debate about who has the temperament and the judgment..." Not identical, but...

And perhaps more difficult, because Sorkin knows the cadence of a great speech, and Obama does even more so, the line produced a similar - forceful, necessary - moment. In fact, if the Republican are smart, they will run an ad with Michael Douglas as Alan Shepherd side by side with Barack Obama. It will be that one opening - Dukakis in the tank, Kerry windsurfing. One. After this tremendous speech it will be not be enough, but something they'll sorely need and why give them anything? He might even open up the ancient issue of Joe Biden lifting speeches from Kennedy and Neil Kinnock (sometime credited, sometimes not.)

And, it was more or less intentional. According to an interview with Sorkin, Obama said, "My intention is to steal a lot of your lines." Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery - that would be fine if Sorkin was lifting from Obama, but not the other way around.

I'm moved, inspired, ready to work my butt off for this once in my lifetime man, I'll probably get slaughtered for this blog and I hope I'm wrong... but I'm mystified.


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Barack Obama brought us a wonderful speech. Obama's speech produced "a bump" that polls alone couldn't possibly measure. I got choked up and a jump in my diaphragm that is, for me, a completely unfami...
Barack Obama brought us a wonderful speech. Obama's speech produced "a bump" that polls alone couldn't possibly measure. I got choked up and a jump in my diaphragm that is, for me, a completely unfami...
 
 
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05:30 PM on 08/29/2008
Slaughtered... no.

Lifted? Um, perhaps as inspiration.
The meanings are different though, so any comparison is weak at best.
04:55 PM on 08/29/2008
I'm not sure you're right on this one at all, JS. The similarity in the lines to those spoken by Sorkin's character are there, but it is mere similarity. When I started your piece I worried that there had been actual plagiarism, but finding no such thing I suspect you're looking for flaw where it does not exist. I can't blame you for this natural tendency toward pessimism.. During the speech, as I became choked up and hopeful, I turned to my wife and said, "I think this guy is actually going to take the White House. Then he'll have four years to disappoint and disillusion me." Then I hated myself for the thought. There's really no reason NOT to enjoy the excitement, the momentum and the hope fostered by his brilliant oration.

For the first time in my adult life, I do not feel as though my beloved Democratic Party is destroying itself with political ineptitude. Let's not start pulling ourselves apart over turns of phrase that are, at worst, reminiscent of Sorkin dialogue and at best well-structured oratory that puts us in mind of other well-structured oratory.

Meanwhile, John McCain announced his running mate in an absolute implosion of his campaign. "You think you're guy is inexperienced? Take a look at the woman I'M running with!" After weeks of accusing Obama of being a celebrity (read that word with hissing disdain), he brought out a Miss Alaska runner-up.