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Trapped in Classroom Hell?

Posted: 04/15/11 05:00 PM ET

I started my college teaching career as an adjunct back in the 1970s. I was a summer composition instructor in New York at Fordham's Lincoln Center campus and I didn't mind the small salary because I was living at home.

I'd attended Fordham and in my senior year had been mentored by two dedicated, gregarious, hard-working professors, unofficially inducted into the club. My mother and her father had been teachers, so being in the classroom was as much a dream of mine as becoming a published author.

I was thrilled as an adjunct to be doing every single thing connected to teaching, including grading papers. Even grading papers, I should say, since that's what most teachers complain about. It was all new and exciting, and I was lucky because I felt the world was all before me. The academic world, anyway.

Professor X, author of In the Basement of the Ivory Tower, was not lucky when he started his adjunct career. He was forced into it because he and his wife had purchased more house than they could afford and he desperately needed a part-time job to supplement the income from the government job he already had. He picked teaching, the only thing he says he could do with a "worthless" MFA in Creative Writing. It was not a happy choice.

Just as he hadn't thought through his home purchase, he had only a dim understanding of what awaited him in the classroom. He expected his night students to be much better writers than they were, and also to benefit from his instruction more than they did. What he found was unprepared, under-educated students whose grasp of language was chaotic at best. The work they produced was marred by "yawning canyons of illogic and error."

Perhaps because he'd been an English major and in love with poetry, novels, and writing itself, he expected similar passion or at least curiosity in his students. It's hard not to think of the author as woefully unprepared in his own way, and he assesses himself and them as having screwed up in major ways. But isn't his mistake the greater one?

Professor X, who's taught at a small college and a community college for a decade, is passionately depressing about his students' deficiencies and the problems of a culture that pushes people to college when they shouldn't be there. He's equally impassioned and a real downer about the difficulties of writing and writing well. Though he finds some joy in the classroom, joy and writing seem almost antithetical in his worldview. That's as sad a discovery for the reader as X's own discoveries about what his students don't know and don't seem able to learn. I'm happy to say that writing--whether a blog or a novel--has always been enjoyable for me.

X not only dilates at length about the rigors of writing well, he also claims that all writers are afraid. Terrified, in fact. It's a dark assessment, and not every writer will agree. I certainly don't.

But you can't deny the power of this scathing report from the front lines. And whatever you think of him, you're likely to end up wondering as X does how Americans have come to view "college not as a consumer product at all, but as both a surefire, can't-lose financial investment, and even more crucial than that, a moral imperative."

 
 
 

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11:02 AM on 04/30/2011
As an adjunct teaching remedial math at a community college, I can attest to how ill-prepared many students are in this realm. Many people are being given money to go to school rather than work, so they are taking advantage. Some take advantage to better themselves and truly find a better way; while others, much like welfare, abuse the system in order to make a living without working.

Unfortunately, it is not our duty as adjuncts to decide who can and who cannot be in our classes. Of course, we can do our best to communicate and be involved in planning and organization within our respective departments, but in the end it is what it is and we are paid to do what we do.

Do I get frustrated with the students who sign up for my class, and then don't attend after the second week when their financial aid comes through? Of course! Am I irritated by students who have no idea what the responsibilities and expectations of college and life really are? Duh! But in the end, it is my job to do my best to impart knowledge to those who will receive it. And for those who put the effort in and truly gain the knowledge, what a reward!

So we can sit around and complain about students who should be better, or we can invest in those students who really want to be better. The ball's in your court, are you in or out?
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Lev Raphael
Author of "Book Lust!"
07:37 AM on 05/03/2011
Your focus on what your job is, is the right one in my opinion and it's how I was mentored to teach and how I taught. Or tried to. Teaching is a very hard job, harder than most people realize.
08:09 PM on 04/27/2011
"...But isn't his mistake the greater one?..."

I don't think so. At least he can write, whether you agree with him or not. That is more than many can do.
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Lev Raphael
Author of "Book Lust!"
03:21 PM on 04/28/2011
He is far more experienced and educated than his students and his expectations were woefully out of line. Read the book and see.
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Joseph DeLacy
01:43 PM on 04/27/2011
Sorry that every student isn't shakespeare..
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Lev Raphael
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03:22 PM on 04/28/2011
I think he would have settled for them being him. :-)
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11:35 AM on 04/20/2011
I'm finishing my first semester as a teaching assistant at a state 'flagship' university. One might think that these would be some of the finest students in the state -- not so. Some of the submitted assignments are so sloppy as to be almost insulting. Many of these kids don't seem to even want to be here, but then get mad when they don't get something (a good grade) for free.

I start as an adjunct at a smaller private university next fall semester; I'm hoping that the students there actually want to be there. As for next semester as a TA here, I'll just have to take my valium.
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Lev Raphael
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01:21 PM on 04/20/2011
You've nailed it: expecting a grade for showing up even when that's about all you've done in a course you don't care about. But even in classes like that, I've managed to have a good time and reach some students. It's hard, hard, work--but it's also fun.

Good luck in the Fall!
12:16 AM on 04/20/2011
I am easily the least qualified person to comment on the nature of composition in America. I'm an engineering student and as such I perpetually doubt the value of writing. By now most of you have probably noticed a lack of proper punctuation. The truth is I can't place a comma semi-colon or hyphen for that matter I even suppose my periods are mostly just fillers. On the other hand I would guess that most of you have never heard of the Cauchy residue theorem and have probably never performed a Taylor series on a Fourier transform. My basic point is that nearly everybody has a unique talent. Some people can play poker some people can solve equations and some people can write. Anybody who expects perfection or even better than average results in all categories from every student is destined for disappointment.
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Lev Raphael
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12:40 AM on 04/20/2011
Exactly so! We're dealing both with innate talent and also with interest. I was always good at writing, from 2nd grade on, poor at math of all kinds except geometry, not crazy about the sciences and I put my time into what interested me most. But the missing piece is the teacher because I've had classes I was eager to take spoiled by bad teaching and classes I was doubtful about turn out to be great, thanks to the teachers.
08:12 PM on 04/27/2011
While your point is well taken, the issue is writing competence not perfection. A five paragraph expository essay is an excercise in writing competence for the college level: Minimum!
10:40 AM on 04/19/2011
I am a high school teacher and live in a town that has a well regarded state liberal arts college. For every one of the past 20 years that I have lived here, the college has either built or purchased a new facility and has continued to expand the size of its student population. Yet professors at the school blame the public school system for the increasing need for remediation among incoming freshman. Everyone is NOT mentally equipped to benefit from a college education. As colleges expand and increase their enrollment numbers, the overall quality of students will continue to decline. Nothing can be done, short of eugenics, to increase people's IQs. At some point the higher education industry will have to stop expanding or the product they produce (college educated adults) will be so dilluted as to be worthless.
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Lev Raphael
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12:17 PM on 04/19/2011
I think whatever your opinion of Professor X as a teacher when you read his book, it's hard to disagree with some of his conclusions about higher education, which echo in part what you're saying. That's why I ended where I did in the blog. Thanks for stopping by!
10:25 PM on 04/18/2011
As a college teacher who loves his job, I think the key is this: if you love teaching, you need to be ready and willing to meet each student where he/she is, and relish the challenge of helping them get somewhere better. If that sometimes means helping student master basic literacy or understand the fundamentals of using logic while writing, then take on that challenge with gusto. There will be frustrations, and times when huge efforts show no result. But there also will be times when students respond, progress and then move on to bigger and better things. And when you can help a student do that, at whatever level, it's gratifying. But if you spend the whole time just resentful of what your students can't do, or bitter because you think that you're above helping those who most need help, then you're going to end up with a view like Professor X's (or so it sounds).
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Lev Raphael
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10:37 PM on 04/18/2011
I agree with everything you say, based on my decade+ of teaching. One of my most gratifying classes was teaching a short story class where one student who seemed really lost for much of the semester came to me at the end and said, "I didn't understand much of anything when we started, but I think I get a lot of it know." And he was right.

One thing that struck me about the book was how unhappy X has been teaching and how difficult he finds it, and how he also doesn't seem happy about writing, either, and talks about it as if it's an ordeal most of the time. That's become a kind of solipsistic cultural cliche: writing = suffering if it's any good. I recommend all teachers read his book whatever they think of it, it's illuminating.
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09:22 AM on 04/18/2011
I can tell you that it's because many students don't care about quality.
12:39 AM on 04/18/2011
A simpler thought for the rocket scientists:

Wanna know what's wrong with composition courses?

Trying to teach people who have never read a book in their life how to write.

In 4 months, a few hours a week.

Good luck.
01:58 AM on 04/18/2011
The secondary schools in this nation have failed miserably. How is it possible that, in a private 4-year college that is competitive, so many freshmen don't understand the concept of a thesis or topic sentence? Further, most of them seem incapable of following basic instructions for formatting, etc. And how is it possible that, in a non-competitive 2-year college, nearly half the students in the freshman composition classroom do not understand that a sentence must begin with a capital letter and end with a period. I wish I were exaggerating, but I am not.
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Lev Raphael
Author of "Book Lust!"
06:57 AM on 04/18/2011
So what's the answer? To not teach the classes at all?
12:37 AM on 04/18/2011
The trouble with every single discussion of education is that everyone eventually starts waxing rhetorical, using words like "inspiring." In any field, in any endeavor, when people start speechifying and invoking "inspiration," make sure you know where your wallet is.

You won't see near this level of empty rhetorical dreaminess over on thhe nuclear blogs. Life or death over there.

Why all the rhetoric? One reason is Hollywood. Everybody is supposed to be Robin Williams. Whose wonderful inspiration, btw, resulted in a suicide, if you follow the rather lame drift of that lame movie.

Here's the first lesson that should be taught in Frosh Comp: nothing in this world is "inspirational." That's the kind of talk they use when they are sending you off to war.
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Lev Raphael
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06:56 AM on 04/18/2011
Some of my best teachers inspired me with a love of subjects I never thought I would be interested in (like Geometry!) or authors I had previously disliked or misunderstood (like Fitzgerald).
Mountain Momma
Seemed like a good idea at the time
08:09 PM on 04/17/2011
Anyone who goes into college teaching for any reason other than a desire to teach and share knowledge is going to be sorely disappointed. It's hard work, rewards are few and far between, and you have to grab successes and celebrate them. As the saying goes: "Better to light a candle than curse the darkness."
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Lev Raphael
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08:34 PM on 04/17/2011
I agree. His desperation led him to a place where he was ill-prepared to flourish and saw far more what his students lacked than how he could help him (when he could). I was an English major and I had an MFA and I have never expected my students to share my love of literature.
09:31 AM on 04/17/2011
I didn't teach writing, but in my decades as a college professor I saw a terrible decline in the quality of writing and reasoning in the students I did teach and I can imagine how hard working with those students in a writing class might be. I also saw many students who were emotionally unprepared for college and needed to go to counseling because they could not handle the pressure, the expectations, and the work load. So what's going on in our high schools? Why aren't our students better prepared?
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Lev Raphael
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11:35 AM on 04/17/2011
Good questions. Having helped two sons through their high school writing classes, one thing I noticed was that their teachers didn't write themselves in any way, but I'm sure the situation is more complicated than that.
Mountain Momma
Seemed like a good idea at the time
08:12 PM on 04/17/2011
Because K-12 education prepares students to fill in bubbles on tests, not think creatively and write expressively. Everyone who sees the results of this misguided quest to improve K-12 education needs to support meaningful reform, support the efforts of quality teachers - and support the end of testing as it exists now.
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Lev Raphael
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08:35 PM on 04/17/2011
We will never see true reform with teachers being talked about so contemptuously by our politicians who haven't any understanding of how hard it is to be a dedicated teacher. They will continue to savage unions, cut funding, increase class size.
08:15 PM on 04/18/2011
Teaching to the test has ruined American education but the politicians love it and discount what teachers say and know. We have the absolute wrong people making decisions about areas they don't remotely understand (and some don't even care about).
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12:53 PM on 04/16/2011
Sorry- left out "and we will just be" in last sentence.
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12:51 PM on 04/16/2011
Instead of the crumbling institutions of higher ed, let's have an in depth discussion about what learning means, and what we expect from people of any age when they learn. Until the US public does this, all we have to fall back on are assumptions about the functional value of a college education, public elementary and secondary schools as childcare, and be vulnerable to the growing market that plays on our fears, shilling educational "tools", "systems", and "programs" to assure us we are ok.
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Lev Raphael
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02:15 PM on 04/16/2011
Professor X's book does in fact also talk about what it means to learn in the classes he and his peers teach.
01:42 AM on 04/16/2011
May I suggest that for those of us who may still care about the difference between "it's" and "its," for example, let alone "There's" and "Theirs," the issue at hand is self-evidently not economics.
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Lev Raphael
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07:04 AM on 04/16/2011
Brad, read the book, economics really is a big art of the picture in more than one way.