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Michael Port

Michael Port

Posted: December 15, 2010 11:15 AM

A primary reason that many professional service providers fail to build thriving businesses is that they struggle to articulate in a clear and compelling way exactly what solutions and benefits they offer. They don't know how to talk about what they do without sounding confusing or bland or like everyone else -- and without using an elevator speech. You know, that 30-second commercial that's supposed to wow someone with what you do in the time it takes an elevator to go from the first to the fifth floor.

No one wants to listen to your elevator speech

I've been polling audiences of thousands for years on this issue. During each speech I ask, "How many of you love, love, love listening to someone else's elevator speech?" No hands go up. I then ask, "How many of you love, love, love giving your elevator speech?" Same thing. No hands.

So what gives? If we don't like listening to or giving the speech, why is it still being taught? Because, of course, we need to be able to talk about what we do -- I get the concept. However, in this case, the elevator speech has been inappropriately appropriated by the service professional. Not only does it not work well, it makes us look foolish, or, worse yet, obnoxious.

The elevator speech does not help sell professional services.

The elevator pitch is designed for the entrepreneur to pitch an idea to a venture capitalist or angel investor in the hopes of receiving funding, not for the service professional to try to build a relationship of trust with a potential client.

Venture capitalists often judge the quality of an idea on the basis of the quality of its elevator pitch. Makes perfect sense, in that situation. But this is not how a relationship develops between a client and a service professional. You're trying to earn the status of a trusted adviser, not trying to raise money to create some new product like metal-detecting sandals. Totally different context. Totally different dynamic.

So, how do you talk about what you do?

By using this crazy concept that I call a conversation. You know when two people actually care about what the other has to say? Shocker, I know. Creative -- but not scripted! -- conversations will spark curiosity and interest about you and your services, products, and programs. If you know, and I mean really know, who you help, what challenges they face, how you help them, and the results and benefits they get from your services -- you can talk about what you do any which way 'till Sunday; thirty seconds, three minutes, three hours, it doesn't matter.

Or, you could go with an overblown, high-falutin, hyperbole-laden elevator speech that's supposed to make you look like a rock star in 30 seconds. Unfortunately, I doubt the excessively exuberant elevator pitch is going to compel the listener to whip out his credit card right then and there.

Developing Your 'Book Yourself Solid' Dialogue

Let's put it all together with a simple five-part exercise that will help you talk about what you do.

Part I: Summarize your target market in one sentence.

Part II: Identify and summarize the three biggest and most critical problems that your target market faces (what they want to get away from).

Part III: Identify and summarize your target markets' three most tangible desires (what they want to get to)

Part IV: Identify the number one most relevant result you help your clients achieve.

Part V: List the benefits your clients' experience as an outcome of the result you provide.

You now have an outline that will help you clearly articulate what you do without sounding confusing or bland. In fact, you'll sound like a superstar because you can use this outline or framework to have a meaningful conversation with another human being.

Reminder: this is not a speech. Don't stay married to the format. Be sure to improvise. Using the structure can be helpful but you may not need to go through every element of this framework in every conversation. The person you're engaged with might end up doing all the talking and even supply your side of the dialogue accurately. Then you can just sit back and relax. The point is, if you're prepared with these five elements, you have the required ingredients for talking about what you do so you can cook up a sweet and tasty business, booked solid with high-paying, high-value clients.

Called "an uncommonly honest author" by the Boston Globe and a "marketing guru" by The Wall Street Journal, Michael Port can be seen regularly on MSNBC and is a New York Times Bestselling author of four books including Book Yourself Solid, Beyond Booked Solid, The Contrarian Effect and The Think Big Manifesto. Get free chapters from Book Yourself Solid at www.BookYourselfSolid.com

 
 
 

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A primary reason that many professional service providers fail to build thriving businesses is that they struggle to articulate in a clear and compelling way exactly what solutions and benefits they o...
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11:48 AM on 01/22/2011
I agree with what you're saying but I also do believe in the "elevator speech" or what every you want to call it. People need a fast and easy way to say what they do when others ask - weather its on an elevator at a party or some other kind of event. If you can nail it in one sentence and grab their attention, they are interested in listening to the rest of your story! Funny I was just thinking about the term elevator speech and honestly - no one has ever asked what I do in an elevator!
11:40 AM on 12/21/2010
Conversations are the touchstone for marketing and sales for professional services. For one thing, the nuances of what makes one professional a better fit than another just can't be captured in an elevator speech. For another, professional services involve collaboration with the client. This collaboration needs to start long before you are hired.

Finally, conversations are just more human, which makes them better vehicles for reaching other human beings.
07:50 PM on 12/16/2010
Great article. I always hated when I went through sales training and they made you develop an elevator speech. It made no sense to me. For the most part, good prospects are gotten through conversations and/or referrals.
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02:39 AM on 12/16/2010
Part I: Summarize your target market in one sentence.
All the world, lol.
Part II: Identify and summarize the three biggest and most critical problems that your target market faces The world is so big, and everyone doesn't have cell phones, some can't be reached. lol
Part III: Identify and summarize your target markets' three most tangible desires (what they want to get to)
A vast poll of clients, some have money and some want to buy things.
Part IV: Identify the number one most relevant result you help your clients achieve.
To spend their money, buy things and my products make it possible.
Part V: List the benefits your clients' experience as an outcome of the result you provide.
They get new stuff, the stuff is shiny and new and they get to show their new stuff to their family and friends.

The outline can be used to make a funny comedy skit.
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07:54 AM on 12/16/2010
... or what someone actually thinks is a serious business proposal that's going to net him a big fat chunk of money that he can blow and get away with it. Hey, it worked in 2000.
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10:40 PM on 12/15/2010
Full disclosure: I am not a bezillionaire. Therefore, please do not pester me in the elevator

Having said that: isn't the whole idea of "the elevator speech" really just a bunch of huey, anyhow? Sure, you need to have a crystal-clear idea of why your idea has merit ... you need to have a clear-enough set of thoughts on the matter to be able to get to the point very directly ... but ...

Let's face it: anyone who's seriously considering handing you $X million dollars is going to grill you. With lots and lots and lots of detailed questions. He or she is going to subject you to an interrogation, then pore over the documents you have provided, then "smoke it over" and "trust their gut" before actually handing you a check.

And they probably won't hand you that check "all at once." I know I wouldn't. I'd pledge to provide financial backing to your concern, but I'd also make sure that you weren't spending MY hard earned money on, say, lava lamps.

Being an investor in a business venture is a lot like being married. A =lot= like being married. Sure, you might "do it for love," but you'll also do it for reason.
03:03 PM on 12/15/2010
I love when this happens: "The person you're engaged with might end up doing all the talking and even supply your side of the dialogue accurately." Having a dialogue (asking the other person questions and being curious about them) is definitely the way to make this happen.
02:58 PM on 12/15/2010
Of course, inherent in this idea is the concept of listening. Sometimes, as Post points out, a few words from you can lead to the other person sharing a lot. In professional services business development, listening often (always?) comes first.
02:54 PM on 12/15/2010
My favorite lines: "So, how do you talk about what you do? By using this crazy concept that I call a conversation."
02:53 PM on 12/15/2010
Love, love, love this...my favorite lines: "So, how do you talk about what you do? By using this crazy concept that I call a conversation."
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01:49 PM on 12/15/2010
Gosh, if only there was a program that would allow me to pay for the very strategies described here...
01:07 PM on 12/15/2010
There is no substitute for being prepared to explain the work you do in two or three sentences. People you have just met will sometimes ask, "What do you do?" and then, "What is that like?" If your answer sounds vague, confused, or distressed, the chances of that leading to a conversation about your work are not so good.
12:40 PM on 12/15/2010
Yes! Great framework for having a real conversation. Let's ditch the elevator pitches. Thanks, Michael!
11:54 AM on 12/15/2010
Imagine that, a conversation. It's better to have 3 conversations that empower both/all parties to connect and see how they can make a difference for each other, leaving the space better than before in some way, than to deliver/receive 30 elevator speeches transmitted by a robot. Thanks, Michael.
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11:46 AM on 12/15/2010
Hey Michael:

GREAT post. I couldn't agree more. Elevator speeches are just pitches disconnected from real communication or understanding. However, it sure is challenging in today's sound bite world to adequately communicate and connect when we're all moving at cyber speed. Looking forward to more from you!

Russell Bishop