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02/10/2014 10:25 am ET Updated Apr 12, 2014

Some Questions About Some Common Core Lessons

As a teacher in a private school I am not currently required to follow the Common Core State Standards. That said, because I am a teacher, I am following closely the discussion about them, their implementation, issues, and so forth. One resource I've come across is the Achieve the Core website created by Student Achievement Partners, who describe themselves as  "....a non-profit organization working to support teachers across the country in their efforts to realize the promise of the Common Core State Standards for all students."  As for the site, they state the following:

This website is full of free content designed to help educators understand and implement the Common Core State Standards. It includes practical tools designed to help students and teachers see their hard work deliver results. achievethecore.org was created in the spirit of collaboration. Please steal these tools and share them with others.

So I decided to check out a few of the ELA/Literacy "Common Core-aligned sample lessons with explanations and supporting resources." And the ones I looked at were so full of problems that it made me wonder who is vetting them as worthy of teacher use.

One  that I looked at particularly closely is on Charlotte's Web. (I came across it by looking through their lessons for fourth grade. I can't link to it directly, I'm afraid, as it takes you to a word document of the lesson.) Because I feel I'm pretty expert at the teaching of  Charlotte's Web, I was curious about the lesson they had on the book.  And I found it very problematic. The questions seem to suggest it is a play version of the book, but no reference for it is cited. No edition of the book or play is given although there are page numbers given for various questions.  The level of questioning is simplistic, surprising given the desire of the Common Core creators to make experiences with reading more complex and rigorous.  Since I feel White's book is a wonderful one to use with children as an entry into close reading, the lack of it and very low-level engagement recommended in this particular lesson was something I found despiriting. It looked similar to the many poor lessons about the book I have seen over the years.

The final task is to "Write an essay explaining what makes Charlotte 'no ordinary spider'.  How do these special qualities help Wilbur? Use evidence from the story to support your answer."  That makes me so sad --- there is so much more to this book. The major themes of the book (say that of life and death) that fourth graders are completely capable of discussing are completely missing from this incredibly muddled lesson plan.

I then also looked at a lesson focused on a single chapter from the book, "Escape."  It is evidently  to be taught in five sessions over five days, 45 minutes each. I can only say that I'd curl up and die if I had to spend that much time with that particular chapter. Sure, it is a fun one, but it barely even gets to the serious themes of the book. While I could perhaps see spending more than a period on "The Cool of the Evening," or "The Last Day," even then I  couldn't see spending five periods on them or on any one chapter of any book. Further, in these five lessons there is little about the wonderful opening that was White's original beginning of the book or anything much on the glorious writing itself, say White's extraordinary use of language to convey sensory details. Now THAT I could and do spend quite a bit of time on (but still probably not a full period, much less five).

At the end, students are asked "Describe what lesson(s) Wilbur learns at the end of the story. What in the text helps you to know this?" The answer provided is:

Wilbur learns that sometimes we aren't ready to accept the consequences for our actions/decisions. He also found out that he was too young to go out into the world alone.

Hmm...I don't think that the first sentence is the point of the chapter at all. (I'm guessing it is more likely something the writer of the lesson wanted to emphasize for his or her own reasons.) The second is closer to what I think White had in mind, relating it more to the theme of growing-up that runs through the book.  Yet to take five days to study this one chapter in isolation from the whole book --- I can't even imagine it.

Then there is the culminating task that is again about the moral lesson:

Wilbur has second thoughts about his choice to escape. First, describe what it means to have second thoughts about something. Then, use evidence from the text to explain how Wilbur's second thoughts show that sometimes we are not ready to accept the consequences of our actions.

Nothing against moral lessons, but again, I don't believe that is the main point White wanted to make.

I looked at a few more lessons and none of them seemed any better.  So just be wary, folks, of some of the lessons being touted for Common Core.

Also at educating alice.