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The Orange Prize Has Let Us Down

Posted: 06/10/11 10:12 AM ET

The Creative Writing MFA is the singularly most devastating occurrence to hit literature in the 20th century, churning out writers of utterly indistinguishable competence.

I'm referring, of course, to the news that the Orange Prize has been won by Tea Obreht, the "youngest ever recipient" at aged 25 -- her age mentioned in every press-release, as if it might endear or excuse their decision. A plump, blonde, smiling MFA-product, Obreht's debut novel, The Tiger's Wife, has resulted in some astonishingly pretentious bullshit from the critics, to rival the content of her own book. Despite "the occasional whiff of adjectival overexuberance" The Guardian sniffs, in a contemptible piece of writing which makes me want to headbutt the author, The Tiger's Wife is "vivid and limber; a picaresque romp through the fragments of former Yugoslavia." Britain's Evening Standard tells us, without a hint of irony, that "The Tiger's Wife is more than fiction. It is about burying the dead" referring frequently to the book's ability to "heal the international image of her birth country."

I could go on, but I'd rather pluck my own pubic hairs than read this fawning idiocy written by fools who have only read the press release of a novel they probably couldn't get through either.

The problem with The Tiger's Wife is it's unreadable: turgid, overwritten, self-indulgent and in need of a heavy editorial hand, not to mention about 10 years more life experience to give the two-dimensional characters, including an irritatingly earnest narrator, a bit of zap up their winsome asses. It's polished. Obreht can churn out a (very long, overwritten) sentence. It's competent. It's a book.

But my god is it boring.

Worthy, insufferably dull, and an ordeal, it's the kind of book that one reads only because a sibling or loved one wrote it -- that, or you were foolhardy enough to digest the bullshit storm that the literary establishment is currently whipping up in its attempts to make people buy this crap instead of Us Weekly. It's like gagging down spinach when you hate it -- there's plenty of ways to get your intellectual nutrition, other than the bland offerings of the MFA Creative Writing course. It's not as if the consumption of this dreary rubbish will make us into better, more intelligent people: people worthy to sit next to Zadie Smith at dinner, politely and knowledgeably conversing about modern fiction.

And don't get me started on Zadie -- another writer who proved to be a great literary bore. Her essays "On Beauty" were like being forcibly strapped into a Cambridge lecture theater and waterboarded by some bratty, egotistical over-read teen's pompous thesis on art. Shut up Zadie. You're about as entertaining as an enema. The only redeeming feature about Zadie is her great first book, and the fact we can now blame her subsequent foray into mediocrity upon media over-hype and a spell at Harvard.

But back to Tea (who should be friends with Zadie). I'm going to admit now that I haven't read all of The Tiger's Wife. A degree in English Literature has taught me many useful and discerning skills, amongst which is this little gem: if you can't get past page 50, give up. Only in very rare cases has persistence in reading boring literature paid off. I suspect this is not one of them. Why? Because I have read Tea's competent, assured, boring-as-fuck prose before: in a million other aspiring writers churned out by the MFA system, who then go on to take up professions as teachers in the MFA system, passing on their identical mediocrity to a new generation of award-winning identical mediocre visionaries.

Yes, I know that the arguments against MFA's are the old hat now: they promote elitism, no one can 'teach' writing, writers would be better off traveling the world, imbibing a few drugs, having a shag and running out of money than sitting in some stale, forty-thousand dollar a year classroom being taught how to produce such startling unoriginal over-crafted lines as: "These stories run like secret rivers through all the other stories of his life." Yada yada yada. But when a literary prize that was once brave enough to award Lionel Shriver's controversial novel We Need To Talk About Kevin -- a book that no publisher, like Lolita, was willing to touch -- has reverted to affirming the essential inanity of the 21st century MFA course, we need to start talking again, a little louder, a little more vociferous.

Far from enticing the general public away from devouring reality TV, telling them that they should regard books like The Tiger's Wife as great works of literature only reconfirms what the suspicious, unread masses have long since suspected: 'literature' is boring, now fuck off and let me watch TOWIE.

Although I earn my living as a screenwriter, books are my first love. It pains me to see that even after centuries confirming that 'the establishment' rarely has its finger on the pulse concerning what will last and endure as great literature, it still insists on pretending otherwise. I personally think we should double the prices of MFA Creative Writing courses, and use the profit to promote literacy and language skills in deprived youth. And then we should make 10 years in the real world compulsory for all writers who have graduated from an MFA course before the age of 25. That's 10 years without access to a trust-fund or Ivy League university or The Guardian (I say The Guardian merely because it annoys me, not for any scientific purpose).

At the end of 10 years, they can submit their work in the proper channels -- i.e. cold calling publishers and agents, not through their academic Pulitzer-prize winning supervisor who knows this dude at The New Yorker. If it's not derivative of Anna Karenina, nor does it feature more than three bad metaphors or similes in the first 50 pages, and upon publication, the media doesn't mention your age nor the three letters M.F.A. -- then you're allowed to exist with the rest of the writing world, submitting your work like anyone else.

Imagine -- Junot Diaz e.t. al might actually be starting to write something decent by now.

Oh how I long for the days of writers like Nabokov: those who hadn't spent five years learning how to put a fucking sentence together, but instead wrote with their guts.

 

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04:09 PM on 07/01/2011
See my blog post about this provocative article:

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09:48 PM on 06/21/2011
It is sad when one writer resorts to bashing another.

Perhaps use the emotions caused by Obreht's success to fuel your own creative process in a positive way, to produce something that will inspire others, not make them want to avoid your writing completely like this exquisite piece does?
07:07 AM on 06/21/2011
Dear Ruth,

I'm a bit perturbed: both that you thought this was the best way to criticise a novel, and by the standard of editing. Though, frankly, you deserve the editing, since you criticise so heavily the novel's standard of writing.

Danglers galore, confusion around prepositions, sentences without referents, resort to swearing. I can't see Cyril Connolly having written like that. The writing here is simply not assured or interesting enough to support phrases like "competent, assured, boring-as-fuck prose."

"Yada yada yada." This is literary criticism?

And telling someone that you will "have to resort to" calling them names in public? Will you HAVE to? How will it strengthen your position?

So you didn't like the book (enough to read it). There's no law, after all, saying you HAVE to like it; contrary to what you say, no one is telling people they MUST think all prize-winners are "great literature."

Dismissing a writer for being young, blonde, "plump", smiling (in one photo) seems unnecessary in the extreme. You don't say you're a feminist, but it's strange. Why launch a vitriolic, personal attack on a young person whose only crime was to do her best? So the book isn't very good: no one's dead. She'll live a little, and write a better book. Or not.

(N.b., referring to Anis Shivani, clearly a person, as "what," is also rather strange. Just don't call him Shivani, or he might call you a thing too.)
06:10 PM on 06/17/2011
What about the small detail that Zadie Smith does not have an MFA, and has spoken quite proudly about not having ever taken a creative writing course, while Lionel Shriver has an MFA from Columbia - same as your favorite Karen Russell? It seems several literary trends are being conflated here under the popular Anti-MFA banner.
08:25 AM on 06/16/2011
Your anger and vehemence are obvious, but what exactly about the book proves your statement? Attacking the organization and the writer without highlighting what is wrong with the book proves nothing, except your pique.
08:47 PM on 06/15/2011
Wow, this is one of the worst and most hyperbolic pieces I've ever read. Of course, I didn't read past the first paragraph. But still. I know it's terrible. I'm smarter than all of you.
08:24 PM on 06/15/2011
Today I had the choice to either bring a short novel by someone with an MFA to the beach or Saramago.
09:54 AM on 06/15/2011
I will to get this through HuffPo's moderator a second time: This essay is so historically myopic and ill-informed I didn't even know where to begin. What would one say of the French salons that produced ten thousand "no ones" for every Cezanne or Eakins? How many people of Whitman's era called his work "ill-formed," "trite"? In fact, who read Whitman when he was publishing? Not very many Americans.

Fowler predicates her argument in this neat little notion of meritocracy entitling one to write, publish, and receive prizes. BS...time sorts that out. As of this moment, I have over three hundred triolets sitting in my office by British writers from the late 19th and early 20th century that no one ever heard of but indeed, these writes have a book...

In short, this kind of argument fears chaos. To blame the immediate context is to miss the forest through the trees.
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04:32 AM on 06/15/2011
And you can add Karen Russell, Obreht's soul sister, to this shit-producing machine that we've got going under MFA auspices. Just unreadable stuff, anti-literature in every way, and guaranteed to end on the moronic New York Times's end of the year top 10 lists.
05:56 PM on 06/14/2011
sigh... Here we go again with the MFA bashing... :yawn:
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10:30 PM on 06/13/2011
Did you actually Admit to not reading the book , miss Fowler? And it actually shows. I learned more about your personality in reading this piece than about the book you trashed! I would much rather read Anis Shivani dissing the elite culture of creative writting MFA programmes than you. If 'The Tiger's Wife' is a cheap derivative of Anna Karenina, you are an even cheaper devivative of Anis Shivani! You complain about the winner of the prize being too young or immature at the age of 25, and yet you write an article which makes you sound like a 13 year old!
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03:53 AM on 06/15/2011
I don't know what Anis Shivani is, but I'm going to look it up and I'm sure we shall be friends (me and Anis, not you) xx
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05:01 PM on 06/13/2011
"'The problem with The Tiger's Wife is it's unreadable: turgid, overwritten, self-indulgent and in need of a heavy editorial hand."

This is something I have always wondered about. Some people write bad books. This is part of the price we pay for being civilized. Some people are serial killers, some are hedge fund managers, and some write bad books.

There are at least two people who stand between these typing exercises and an unsuspecting public; An agent and an editor. Barring those works by "celebrities" that barely graze an editors desk on their way to Barnes and Noble, how do these things get published?

If bad books were an anomaly we could chalk it up to a handful of editors with drinking problems or unfortunate childhoods. But that is clearly not the case. The sheer volume of this land fill fodder tells us that bad writing is not only tolerated, but encouraged.

What I want to know is, how can I meet these editors? Don't tell me it's just my bad luck and life isn't fair, I know it isn't fair. When I was six years old I watched my father throw my beloved talking Bugs Bunny doll in the trash. I've paid my dues!

It's my turn to go on book tours and do campus readings that lead to unprotected sex with faculty members wives. I may not have talent, but I know what I want and I deserve it.
03:51 PM on 06/13/2011
Her book was boring, but she just wrote a wicked essay about her high school experience in the New Yorker.
05:58 PM on 06/14/2011
She's also got a killer essay in Harper's about hunting "real-life" vampires in the Balkans.
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03:57 AM on 06/15/2011
I read that, I thought it was just as bad as the book. It read so uncomfortably. Her prose has no easy lucidity and confidence. It sounds like she's writing constipated.
03:48 PM on 06/13/2011
Gosh. Thanks. I thought I was just not getting it through some deficiency of my own. You're right. It was "okay" but this book actually was pretty bland.
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Ruth Fowler
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03:58 AM on 06/15/2011
That's what they want you to think. If you don't get the book, it's because you're thick. It's not. It's because they're thick for lauding this shite as great literature. Great literature is Gone With The Wind, it's Updike, it's Roth, it's Didion it's.... not this.
02:34 PM on 06/13/2011
I once asked a friend of mine who was an art curator what he thought about today's art. He said that there was a lot of bad art out there. At first I thought that he was more or less accurate. But the more I thought about it the less I agreed with him because what I saw was a lot of good art out there. Not great art. But a lot of competent, schooled, polished, and well-presented art. I saw prints with a very high degreee of technical proficiency, big introspective paintings, and shining scuptures. And the more I saw of them, the less distinguishable they became. It was the sheer number of competent works that eventually dumbed all of them down.

So I get Fowler's point: Literature too has created a "school" of art that actually subverts and mutes what we look for in great art or at least original art. We now have lots of proficient artists and writers. We now have lots of good art. We just don't have a lot of art that cuts to the core and seres our brains and stands apart from the rest. We've found a cure for the god awful but sacrificed the great for the merely good along the way.